These results came very quickly because the judges, me and That_One_Thespian were very fast!

Please don't get offended if your book scored lower. We had to judge honestly and this is just criticism to benefit your stories!

For the scores there are five criteria's that were judged out of 20 points. These were hook, length, Ending/how blurb was wrapped up, grammar/spelling, and well-written.

Anyways, on to the moment you've been waiting for, the scores!

1. The marks of the engkanto by @HeideHunt
Hook: 10/20 - The hook is a little too wordy and it takes away the interesting aspect.
Length: 13/20 - It's a pretty good length but you used up lots of space with random information.
- 10/20 - It cut off a little abruptly and the information given is kind of all over the place.
Grammar/spelling: 19/20 - I didn't really find any grammar errors except one run on sentence.
Well-written: 15/20 - There was quite a lot of strong vocab, although it faded towards the end of the blurb.
Total - 67/100

2. Forever for you by @dwarkaratna
Hook: 10/20 - This is a decent hook but could be stronger.
Length: 10/20 - I feel like the fifth paragraph is a little unnecessary. It is a little repetitive after the one before it.
Ends nicely/clear plot seen: 12/20 - It seems that the second to last sentence is unnecessary and it could be wrapped up better without it.
Grammar/spelling: 12/20 - The blurb is missing lots of commas, along with some other grammar mistakes. One sentence is missing an 'a'. For example, "in few days."
Well-written: 10/20 - The use of strong vocab is very minimal in this blurb.
Total: 54/100

3. Conform or Suffer by @JankyFluffy
Hook - 5/20 The hook is interesting but then the blurb isn't really continued from there.
Length - 5/20 The blurb is way too short. It is only really one sentence since the rest is just trigger warnings and stuff.
Wrapped up good with clear plot - 0/20 There isn't any clear plot and it is not really wrapped up at all.
Grammar/spelling - 15/20 - There aren't any major mistakes just what seems like a typo in the beginning.
Well-written - 5/20 - There's not much to judge off of since the blurb is so short. It's not badly written there could just be more use of strong vocab and stuff and should be much longer.
Total: 30/100

4. Silverton's Journey by @Sumaia_Islam
Hook - 16/20 - It is a good hook, I like how there was dialogue. The only thing is it was a little bit long for a hook.
Length - 20/20 - It's a perfect length, not too long or short, and summarizes all necessary plot points in enough sentences.
Wrapped up with clear plot - 15/20 - The last few sentences of the last full paragraph seem a bit vague but the plot is still defined.
Grammar/spelling - 20/20 - There are no grammar or spelling mistakes seen.
Well-written - 15/20 - It's good but there is still room for improvement. For example, there could definitely be more use of strong vocabulary words.
Total: 86/100

5. My secretary by @Seamlesslove
Hook - 15/20 - It's not bad but it definitely could be better and more intriguing to pull readers in.
Length - 5/20 - It's definitely a little too short and could definitely have more information given.
Wrapped up with clear plot - 5/20 - It wraps up slightly abruptly with no clear plot able to be depicted.
Grammar/spelling - 10/20 - There are a few grammar mistakes and one spelling mistake.
Well-written - 10/20 - It is not so terribly written, it's just lacking some descriptive vocabulary.
Total: 45/100

6. Away from home by @Bree_42
Hook: 20/20 - Nice hook, I think it draws the reader in decently.
Length: 10/20 - The first two paragraphs seem unnecessary, and don't seem to have much correlation with the rest of the blurb.
Wrapped up with clear plot: 5/20 - Doesn't define a clear plot, could be wrapped up better.
Grammar/spelling: 10/20 - no spelling mistakes, but frequent grammar mistakes. No spaces after periods and lacks commas.
Well-written: 15/20 - Could be much stronger and lacks in certain elements, but not bad overall.
Total: 55/100

7. When the Mafia Kidnapped and tortured yn by @thebtsff
Hook: 0/20 - No hook, doesn't invite the reader in.
Length: 5/20 - Very short, could be longer and less vague.
Ends nicely with clear plot?: 10/20 - Defines a somewhat plot but ends abruptly. Not too bad, but could be better.
Grammar/spelling: 5/20 - No spelling mistakes, but many grammar mistakes, making it difficult to read.
Well-written: 10/20 - overall not very well written. It lacks proper grammar, and isn't description or strong enough to be enticing.
Total: 30/100

8. The cultures by @Applesfire
Hook: 15/20 - Funny hook, draws the reader in.
Length: 20/20 - Good length, not too long or too short and summarizes the plot well.
Ends nicely with clear plot?: 15/20 - Defines the plot well, but the last two sentences seem a bit vague. Well done but could be improved.
Grammar/spelling: 15/20 – No spelling errors, but minor grammar errors such as not capitalizing the first letter and run-on sentences. Seems more like a typo if anything, not too distracting.
Well written: 15/20 - Overall nicely written, and fairly strong, but has some room for improvement.
Total: 80/100 points

9. Call Out | ASTRO by @silverstar_01
Hook: 20/20 - Nice hook, not much to say about it.
Length: 20/20 - Great length, summarizes the plot well and isn't too wordy or short.
Ends nicely with clear plot?: 18/20 - Defines the plot well and leaves the reader, questioning, wanting to read more. The ending is not bad, but a bit too vague/abrupt.
Grammar/spelling: 20/20 - No spelling or grammatical errors.
Well-written: 20/20 - Overall very neatly written and strong, with little to no errors or issues.
Total: 98/100 points

10. Welcome to Mareville: Late night bite by @Romizabooks
Hook: 20/20 - Decent hook with strong vocabulary, fairly enticing.
Length: 5/20 - Way too long, many sentences are unnecessary and have nothing to do with the plot. The strong vocab does not distract from the useless sentences.
Ends nicely with clear plot?: 0/20 - It ends with no defined plot, and doesn't offer any real storyline. What is the conflict, who are our characters?
Grammar/spelling: 20/20 - No spelling or grammatical errors.
Well-written: 10/20 - Overall well written, and extremely strong vocabulary, but has no actual plot or storyline in too many unnecessary sentences. This almost seems AI generated, which is a compliment if it is not.
Total: 55/100 points

11. Aerwyna by @IBA_005
Hook: 15/20 - The hook is decent, but easily could be much stronger and more enticing.
Length: 10/20 - It is fairly short, and could be slightly longer. However, it's not too short to where it's completely vauge.
Ends nicely with clear plot?: 10/20 - I understand the ending somewhat, but I feel like it could be less confusing. The plot is only somewhat defined. Could be improved.
Grammar/spelling: 5/20 - No spelling mistakes, but frequent grammar mistakes, such as run on sentences and general errors. This makes iy slightly hard to understand.
Well-written: 10/20 - It is written fairly well, but could be longer with much stronger and descriptive vocabulary. It also could be clearer and easier to understand. Overall not terrible, but needs improvement.
Total: 50/100 points

12. I M POSSIBLE LOVE by @ViniShah2
Hook: 5/10 - The hook could be good, but seems vague and not well thought out. Not bad, but it needs work.
Length: 20/20 - Good length, it is short but doesn't need to be any longer.
Ends nicely with clear plot?: 15/20 - I like the way it ends, leaving readers interested, but could be improved. The plot is fairly clear and defined.
Grammar/spelling: 17/20 - No spelling or grammatical errors, but "5 years" should be "five years."
Well-written: 15/20 - Overall fairly well written and hits the major plot points. I feel that it could be stronger with more descriptive vocabulary, but not terrible.
Total: 72/100 points

13. Romantic Story by @aurora_2604
Hook: 10/20 - Okay hook, could be stronger but not the worst.
Length: 5/20 - It's pretty short, and could be slightly longer to fill in some vague and empty elements. It isn't too short, but has room to be more descriptive.
Ends nicely with clear plot?: 0/20 - It ends a bit abruptly, not defining any actual plot or storyline. What is the conflict, what is the storyline?
Grammar/spelling: 10/20 - No spelling errors but a few general grammatical errors. It doesn't make it too hard to read, but it is a bit distracting and confusing.
Well-written: 10/20 - It has some decent vocabulary, but needs some improvement. It's not very well thought out or well written.

14. Her property by @Kitana085
Hook: 10/20 - Pretty cliche hook, could be more attention grabbing but overall not bad.
Length: 0/20 - Way too short, there's barely anything to read. At that point, you might as well not have a blurb at all. It needs more description and definition to be an actual blurb.
Ends nicely with a clear plot?: 0/20 - It ends very abruptly, and there's no defined plot at all. This needs much improvement.
Grammar/spelling: 15/20 - No spelling mistakes, but very little grammatical errors in this short description.
Well-written: 0/20 - This is too short, and it's not well written. If you want a blurb, add more descriptive and strong vocabulary and aim to extend it to at least a short paragraph.
Total: 25/100 points

15. The beast runs free by @TreGuar
Hook: 0/20 - The "hook" is the entire blurb. I'm not even sure what to put here.
Length: 0/20 - Needless to say that this is extremely short. One sentence is not a blurb, it is a logline. Please add more to this if you want a real blurb.
Ends nicely with clear plot?: 0/20 - There is no defined plot or even an ending. Not sure what to put here either.
Grammar/spelling: 10/20 - No grammatical errors or spelling mistakes, but it is a bit confusing and doesn't make sense.
Well-written: 5/20 - There's not much to even judge off of here. It's got the possibility to be good with the vocabulary used, but it's more of a log line than a blurb. I see you don't like to spoil anything in the descriptions based off the bio, but you can write a descriptive blurb without spoiling anything.
Total: 15/100 points

WINNERS:
🥇1st place: Call Out | ASTRO by silverstar_01
🥈2nd place: Silverton's Journey by Sumaia_Islam
🥉3rd place: The Cultures by Applesfire

Congratulations to all the winners! There were a lot of good blurbs so pls don't be discouraged if you didn't win. Please pm me for your prizes, thank you!