💫ACTION/ADVENTURE RESULTS💫

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So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome !

A special thanks to the judge -scarletjones and Duncana1003
for submitting the results so soon. She literally submitted within a week of announcement of the entries.

So without much delay .

                   🌠    1st place  🌠
  The school of Crown Assassins by               
                  ThePsychoQueen_

           
                   🌠  2nd place🌠

      Sinful Hearts by addicreates

                  🌠   3rd place 🌠

                  Perfect by RCorsini

  
           🌠  Honourable Mention 🌠                         

              Death In Mortnis City by
               lukescurlsenthusiast

SCORES OF ALL PARTICIPANTS:

1. "If It Meant to Save the World" by Sewman


Title: 3
Cover: 4
Blurb: 7
Plot: 9
Originality: 9
Characters: 6
Grammar/Punctuation: 4
Vocabulary/Spelling: 6
Writing Style: 5
Overall Enjoyment: 6
Attractive Power: 5

Total: 64


Review: The idea was unique. I like the idea where the protagonist would be considered the antagonist normally. The idea was intriguing. There were lots of missing commas, run-on sentences, and a few missing words. These detracted from the general flow of the story. This story could benefit from greater character building and emotion.

2."Death In Mortnis City" by lukescurlsenthusiast

Title: 4
Cover: 4
Blurb: 7
Plot: 10
Originality: 9
Characters: 10
Grammar/Punctuation: 7
Vocabulary/Spelling: 8
Writing Style: 9
Overall Enjoyment: 9
Attractive Power: 10

Total: 87

Review: There was missing punctuation, but it only distracted from the story in a few places. I really enjoyed the use of emotions and character building in this story. The writing was dark, but it worked well for this book. The character interactions were realistic and an enjoyment to read. Emotion was used well. I will most likely read more sometime in the future.

3. "DIAVOLA-The Night Hunter" by HulkSmash147563

Title: 5
Cover: 5
Blurb: 7
Plot: 9
Originality: 8
Characters: 7
Grammar/Punctuation: 5
Vocabulary/Spelling: 5
Writing Style: 6
Overall Enjoyment: 6
Attractive Power: 6

Total: 69

Review: The story was interesting and different.I love a good, strong female lead, and this story delivered that. The missing punctuation, missing words, and extra spaces really took away from the story. Use of italics was not consistent. More emotion building would really pull the reader in and make them feel connected to the characters.

4. "Perfect" by RCorsini

Title: 5
Cover: 5
Blurb: 8
Plot: 10
Originality: 9
Characters: 10
Grammar/Punctuation: 9
Vocabulary/Spelling: 9
Writing Style: 10
Overall Enjoyment: 10
Attractive Power: 10

Total: 95

Review: There were very few errors throughout the chapters I read. The short blurb is really intriguing. Initially, I gave the title a lower score, but it made more sense when I read the opening. I absolutely love the descriptions, emotions, and writing style the author uses. I felt the need to read more, and probably will in the future. It is very suspenseful, and a great read.

5."Browser City" by marsaumell

Title: 5
Cover: 5
Blurb: 8
Plot: 9
Originality: 10
Characters: 8
Grammar/Punctuation: 9
Vocabulary/Spelling: 7
Writing Style: 7
Overall Enjoyment: 9
Attractive Power: 9

Total: 86

Review: There were very few errors in this story. The idea is very unique and intriguing. I love how the author makes the characters personalities match what you would think they should be based on their jobs. It is very well thought out. I would like to see a bit more emotion, but it is still a great story.

6. "The Unraveling Truth" hijabi1412

Title: 4
Cover: 3
Blurb: 6
Plot: 6
Originality: 6
Characters: 9
Grammar/Punctuation: 5
Vocabulary/Spelling: 7
Writing Style: 7
Overall Enjoyment:6
Attractive Power: 5

Total: 64

Review:There are quite a few grammatical errors. I love the sassiness of the protagonist. She came off as strong, and perhaps stubborn. By the blurb, this feels like it could be a very interesting story, but I did not reach the action/adventure part after five chapters, so I cannot really say a whole lot in respect to the plot itself.

7.Sinful Hearts addicreates

Title 5/5
Cover 5/5
Blurb 10/10
Plot 9/10
Originality 10/10
Characters 10/10
Grammar/Punctuation 9/10
Vocabulary/Spelling 9/10
Writing Style 10/10
Enjoyment 10/10
Attractive Power 10/10

Total 97/100

Review: Where do I even start? This book was amazing! I loved the original title, and the cover made me want to read the book. If I saw this at a book store, I would definitely pick it off the shelf. And the blurb, eekeroos (that's a good things lmao). It was perfect. Plot had it's weak points here and there, but the originality made up for it. Your characters were great, I loved the depth of them. I couldn't find a single mistake dealing with grammar, and I loved the vocabulary. The descriptions made me feel like I was there. I also really enjoyed your writing style, and the story as a whole. Keep up the fantastic work!

8.Mission 5001: Launched by Joannjoe

Title 3/5
Cover 2/5 
Blurb 8/10 
Plot 7/10 
Originality 9/10 
Characters 7/10 
Grammar/Punctuation 8/10 
Vocabulary/Spelling 6/10 
Writing Style 5/10 
Enjoyment 9/10 
Attractive Power 7/10 

Total: 71/100 

Review: The title was good, a little too, I don't know how to explain it, simple. The cover looked unprofessional in my opinion, and I felt that it was done quickly. Your blurb was short, so maybe adding more context would help the technicalities of your book. The plot was original, however it wasn't the strongest. The characters were nice, and you didn't have very many grammaticall errors. But, the writing style is what brought you down. The chapters are really short and choppy, and the flow isn't present. The paragraphs are too long, and there is barely any dialouge. But, all in all, I enjoyed it. 

9.Rhindelm: Jaegers Zack_Senpai7

Title 5/5
Cover 2/5
Blurb 6/10
Plot 7/10
Originality 9/10
Characters 6/10
Grammar/Punctuation: 3/10
Vocabulary 4/10
Writing Style 2/10
Enjoyment 5/10
Attrqctive Power 3/10

Total 52/100

Review: I thought the title was original, which is good. It's hard to come across a book with an original title these days. The cover however, doesn't include the name or title of your book, which caused a major deduction of points in the category. The blurb was constantly asking questions, making it seem repetative. Due to your writing style, your plot was weak, but that didn't change the original contents within. Your characters felt shallow, and there was no depth to them. Now we're getting to the hard part. I found many grammatical errors in your story, and the range of vocabulary wasn't wide enough. I kind of enjoyed this story, but I felt no attractive power. Take this and work on editing it, and I'm sure it'll become a great success. 

10.Havencrest Earth_to_Kenadie

Title 5/5
Cover 3/5
Blurb 9/10
Plot 8/10
Originality 7/10
Characters 10/10
Grammar/Punctuation 8/10
Vocabulary/Spelling 7/10
Writing Style 9/10
Enjoyment 10/10
Attractive Power 8/10

Total 84/100

Review: I liked this book, it was a fun read. The title was complex, but simple at the same time, which was really creative on your part. Your cover however, was something off of Canva wattpad book covers, and I've seen it on so many other occasions. The blurb was amazing, and it drew me in as a reader. The plot was strong, but however it wasn't super original. Your characters were very much your stand out component in this book. I absolutely loved them! Your grammar could be worked on in some cases, dealing with sentence structure and a few other things here and there, and same with the range of vocabulary you used. Also, something weird I noticed was that the spaces between paragraphs in some cases were smaller than others, in randomized places. Make sure to leave the larger space (just one enter key) instead of the smaller one. I loved your writing style and really enjoyed the book! Keep up the good work!

11.School of the Crown Assassins ThePsychoQueen_

Title 5/5
Cover 4/5
Blurb 10/10
Plot 10/10
Creativity 10/10
Characters 10/10
Grammar/Punctuation 10/10
Vocabulary/Spelling 10/10
Writing Style 10/10
Enjoyment 10/10
Attractive Power 10/10

Total 99/100

Review: Whoa. This review may not be that long because I'm just going to be giving compliments on this fantastic book. Title is amazing, straightforward but eye-catching. The cover was a tiny bit bland, but I mean, I still loved it. The blurb drew me in, and after I read the excerpt I wanted to start reading so bad. Plot and originality was off the charts. The character depth and development were really great. The grammar, punctuation, vocabulary and spelling were all correct and perfect. I loved the writing style, and as you can see, love the story. Trust me, you and this book will go far.

12. In Another World inorinanase

Title 2/5
Cover 3/5
Blurb 3/10
Plot 5/10
Originality 4/10
Characters4/10
Grammar/Punctuation 5/10
Vocabulary/Spelling 6/10
Writing Style 2/10
Enjoyment 3/10
Attractive Power 2/10

Total 39/100

Review: Okay, let's cut to the chase. The title, well, was not original. It related to the story, yes, but it was just too generic. The cover was a step-up from the title, but I still couldn't really figure out what was going on from the dimly lit graphics. The blurb was much too short, and contained grammatical errors. Like your title, your plot wasn't original, along with being weak. On another note which was not a category for judging, the flow was very choppy. Your characters were okay, but the writing style overshadowed them. I'll get to that later. The grammar was all over the place, and the punctuation was completely wrong. When you finish a chapter, make sure to go back and edit. Your variety of vocabulary was limited, and I caught many spelling errors. The writing style, I may go on a rant here. The script style of writing is not a book. It's for movies and theatre productions. Books need description, imagery, along with the dialouge. If you change that, your book would be so much better. Due to those reasons, I didn't enjoy it very much, and it wasn't moving. But, if you change those things, it could be great.

13.Archer by Anonymity_Is_Nobody

Title: 4
Cover: 4
Blurb: 10
Plot: 9
Originality: 7
Characters: 10
Grammar/Punctuation: 8
Vocabulary/Spelling: 9
Writing Style: 7
Enjoyment: 8
Attractive Power: 7

Total: 74

Review: The beginning really pulled me into the story. Her failed attempt was gripping and intriguing. The prologue should have ended after that, with the one week later could have been the first chapter. This may be a personal preference, but it makes more sense to split it there to keep a gripping prologue. Grammar and punctuation is mostly good, but watch for missing commas. There are a few places that are hard to read because of missing commas. There were a few spelling and vocabulary errors, but they were minimal, which is always nice to find. I absolutely loved the diversity of the characters, looks and personality, and the conflict that comes with that diversity. The story is very interesting and intriguing. I could see myself reading more in the future.

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