💫FANTASY RESULTS💫

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So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome !

A special thanks to the judges EvighetInvicta and RaphaelStout234 for submitting the results so soon and taking their valuable time to judge your books.

So without much delay .

             🌠 1st place 🌠

        The Wolf within us by
          ShannaDesmarais

            🌠 2nd place 🌠

     Let me find you by nutellaxgirlx

            🌠 3rd place 🌠

    Allied with dragons by Duncana1003

       🌠 Honourable Mention 🌠

     The Prophecy of the Black day by

        MenteMelan

SCORES OF ALL PARTICIPANTS:

1.To Stop My Death by Redstarshard

3/5 Title,
4/5 Cover,
8/10 Blurb,
9/10 Plot,
10/10 Originality,
8/10 Characters,
7/10 Grammar,
8/10 Vocabulary/Spelling,
9/10 Writing Style,
9/10 Overall enjoyment,
8/10 Attractive power

Total= 83/100

Review:

This book was different from the rest. I like the author's writing style, and the creativity that came from them. It's beautiful, intriguing and very interesting. The characters are well-described with their natures and personality, and I love the description of places, objects and memories. I really like this book, and I hope to see more from this author in the future.

2. The Prophecy of the Black Day by
MenteMelan

Title - 4/5
Cover - 5/5

Blurb - 8/10
Plot - 8/10
Originality - 9/10
Characters - 8/10
Grammar/Punctuation - 9/10
Vocab./Spelling - 9/10
Writing Style - 9/10
Overall Enjoyment - 7.5/10
Attractive Power - 7/10

Total: 83.5/100

Review - First off, I certainly liked the idea & concept of this work, The Prophecy of the Black Day. Though it was a bit confusing at the start, and I wasn't totally sure if elements of your previous novel/work was carried over here, it quickly became easy to understand. I would also like to commend your use of vivid imagery, and utilization of emotion. In addition to those two, excellent use of dialogue is also one of the strong points in this story. However long story short, I felt like there were a few issues, albeit minor ones, with the plot & word choice. I won't provide specific examples, as there are several ones, and for plot, there are scenes where the following scenes aren't as cohesive as it could be. That being said, most of that is from the eye of the beholder, and some may differ in their opinions. So due to both its strong points and few weaknesses, I can confidently say that while this isn't per say, the best work I've read, in person/irl/authors under publishing houses, nor around fellow Wattpadders I've met participating in awards, this is something that is definitely enjoyable, and that I would probably read in my free time. Therefore, I would like to congratulate you on a solid work of fantasy, and best of luck on future chapters!

3. Fated Souls by omlata18

Title - 4/5
Cover - 4/5

Blurb - 6/10
Plot - 7.5/10
Originality - 7.5/10
Characters - 7.5/10
Grammar/Punctuation - 8/10
Vocab./Spelling - 8.5/10
Writing Style - 7.5/10
Overall Enjoyment - 7/10
Attractive Power - 7.5/10

Total: 75/100

Review - So, I really like your concept of this two-conflicting-identities plot that would inevitably lead to a lot of conflict & issues (yes I just repeated a form of a word already used). However, to start off, I really did not enjoy the blurb. To some extent it was informative, but to some extent it just made it more confusing. First of all, (I hope I don't sound mean) don't expect me to know all of these vocabulary terms that you're throwing at me immediately, the minute I press the work & see the blurb. Also the blue-eyed guy just sort of pops out of nowhere, like you introduce their dream version after you talk about how annoying they are. It just seems like you're not providing me information in a more linear way, instead sort of indecisive on what you're going to provide me. However, I suspect that some of these terms, including a para, are probably from an earlier work. I obviously haven't read an earlier work that might've breached on the topic. So remember when you're writing a novel that shares information or is a sequel, or just uses terms that most people wouldn't know, it would be great to provide more context. And secondly, I don't like how you jump from "work of a para" to, "And boom!" . That transition wasn't really good. Basically my critique here from my little blurb-rant is that, please write a better blurb that is more cohesive. Cohesion is king. Beyond that, I think you did introduce a very interesting cast of characters, and a plot that keeps readers on edge/suspicious, as 2 people have been murdered. So I would like to commend you on that. Also going back on the topic of transition, I think there could be an improvement on transitioning between scenes and chapters. Chapter 2 was just not it for me, though the evil Queen of Mean reference was definitely fun for me lol (informal language!). Also, though I like your imagery, I would definitely like to see more vivid & stronger words that are capable of sending images to a reader's mind. However, I know that describing things, especially in Fantasy, is especially hard. That being said, I would definitely give you a higher score if you tweaked the blurb, interactions between characters, smoother transitions, & better cohesion. Good luck!

4. Eternal Shadows by IsisSapphire

Title - 4.5/5
Cover - 5/5

Blurb - 9/10
Plot - 8/10
Originality - 8.5/10
Characters - 9/10
Grammar/Punctuation - 7/10
Vocab./Spelling - 7/10
W

riting Style - 8/10

Overall Enjoyment - 9/10

Attractive Power - 8/10

Total: 83/100

Review - To start off with, I love the idea, the concept, the characters, the literal bickering between "Rora" (nicknames though) and Zeus, and basically a lot about your work! However, I am saddened to notify you of multiple areas, where grammar, punctuation, &/or Vocab. (was substandard for Vocab) were used incorrectly. Simply put, I love your story & the way you're telling it. However, the specific words & execution of your book has multiple flaws. I would've given higher marks if Grammar & Punctuation had less instances of error. Nevertheless, those mistakes are easily mendable and if you went to a revising/or editing phrase, the majority if not all of those errors would be rectified. Good luck with the future!

5. Let Me Find You by nutellaxgirlx

Title - 4/5
Cover - 5/5

Blurb - 9/10
Plot - 8.5/10
Originality - 9/10
Characters - 8/10
Grammar/Punctuation - 9/10
Vocab./Spelling - 9.5/10
Writing Style - 9.5/10
Overall Enjoyment - 10/10
Attractive Power - 9/10

Total: 90.5/100

Review - Wow, umm, let's just say I was stunned by your writing capabilities. Not to be rude, but I was not expecting them to be that good. Anyways, I really want to compliment you on creating a plot that drew me in, and literally had me hooked. And by hooked, I mean addicted. Only another book out of the 5 others was able to do that (not saying which). In addition, I liked the cast of characters you created, as they were fairly interesting. You clearly know how to make an interesting & beautifully crafted story. However, here's where I become a hypocrite (I make the exact same mistakes lol): though Grammar wasn't a large issue and would barely even qualify as a minor issue, there were a few iffy spots. To give an example, there was a spot in each of the opening paragraphs of both Chapter 1 & 7 (Grammar choices & adjustments that are arguable though), that I felt like detracted from the flow of their respective paragraphs & chapters. Meanwhile, punctuation, spelling, & vocab. were nearly non-existent issues, just with recommendations for different type(s) of punctuation in different areas (not mistakes, just recommendations). Otherwise, I would call your work amazing & something I would definitely read in my spare time, something I usually would only do with my favourite Wattpad or (irl?) publishing-house signed authors. This has been a very enjoyable novel to read, and I am excited for both future chapters, & for errors to be rectified. Good job & good luck!

6. Staff of Dattatreya: The King of Bones by BudhadityaSaysHi

Title - 3.5/5
Cover - 3.5/5

Blurb - 9/10

Plot - 7/10

Originality - 9.5/10

Characters - 7.5/10

Grammar/Punctuation - 8/10

Vocab./Spelling - 9.5/10

Writing Style - 8.5/10

Overall Enjoyment - 7.5/10

Attractive Power - 7/10

Total: 80.5/100

Review - Let's just say I have a slight animosity towards the nation ((current)gov.) of India itself, & it's irrelevant but I just felt like saying that. First of all, I like but dislike the title at the same time. It's a paradox, but while I like it's complexity, I also don't like how it's that long. However, that's just personal opinion, so moving onwards. The cover: I liked how you incorporated at least 2 images, but I did not like the quality nor the color-match of the images. It's interesting, but not necessarily aesthetic to me. On the contrary, I really liked your blurb as it did indeed provide me with enough detail that I wasn't being overloaded in obscure & unknown-to-me information in the literal 1st & 2nd chapters. So nice job. Yet, while the characters presented were decent, I personally did not like them that much. Also, the action kind of felt rushed, but that's hypocritical of me to say that (because I do the exact same thing lol). Next, there were several spots where grammar was a slight issue and slightly detracted from the experience. If you were to take time & read aloud the paragraphs, I would believe that you would catch most of the errors, making their respective paragraphs & chapters flow more. Overall, this wasn't exactly my most ideal cup-of-tea, but nevertheless, it was definitely well executed in some regards, with some room for improvement. I'll try to re-read your book in several weeks or months (time) (like I'll do for every other book I'm judging) and hopefully I'll see (further) refinement. Good luck!

7. Winter's Beginning by @King_with_No_Crown


Title: 4/5
Cover 3/5
Blurb 7/10
Characters 8/10
Vocabulary/Spelling 8/10
Writing style 10/10
Attractive power 8/10
Grammar/Punctuations 7/10
Overall enjoyment 7/10
Plot 8/10

Total : 70/100 

 My review:

This is a wonderful book, so far the book I liked the most in Fantasy. To me it feels that the cover doesn't do justice to this book, but the title is intriguing. The blurb was well-written, a little long, but it gave me information about what was going to happen in the book. The characters are AMAZING, my favorite was Jaylena. Their personalities are so well-written, I could picture them clearly. The Vocabulary was amazing, the spelling just needed to be worked on a little, but I loved it. The writing style I gave 10 out of 10 for because this is SO different, SO creative. The plot was a wonderful, well-placed entanglement of suspense, danger, and intrigue. The attractive power was amazing. I couldn't stop reading. The Grammar/Punctuations were great in the first few chapters, they just need to be looked over near the last few, but it was good. Overall enjoyment, I did enjoy it a lot. This book was honestly refreshing to read, to take my mind away from the normal everyday things, and it sent me on a roller-coaster full of fantasy and intrigue.

8.Allied With Dragons by Duncana1003

4/5 Title,
4/5 Cover,
9/10 Blurb,
9/10 Plot,
10/10 Originality,
9/10 Characters,
9/10 Grammar,
7/10 Vocabulary/Spelling,
8/10 Writing Style,
8/10 Overall enjoyment,
9/10 Attractive power

Total:  86/100

Review:

I find this book very interesting, well-written, creative and amazing. It keeps you hooked, and it's very descriptive. There are a few errors with the spelling, but you can still understand everything that happens within the story. It's been a while since I've read such a wonderful fantasy book, and I hope to see more beautiful works from this aspiring author. 

9.The Adara Chronicles by JessME05

3/5 Title,
4/5 Cover,
7/10 Blurb,
9/10 Plot,
10/10 Originality,
7/10 Characters,
8/10 Grammar,
8/10 Vocabulary/Spelling,
8/10 Writing Style,
7/10 Overall enjoyment,
8/10 Attractive power

Total: 79/100

Review:

This book was well-written, very descriptive and suspenseful. It was very original, and I enjoyed reading every word. The characters are well-described, and at times you can feel their emotions just by reading the words. I loved this book, and I honestly hope to see more wondrous creations by this author in the future. 

10. The Wolf within Us by ShannaDesmarais

4/5 Title,
3/5 cover,
9/10 blurb,
9/10 plot,
10/10 originality,
9/10 characters,
9/10 grammar,
8/10 vocabulary/spelling,
10/10 writing style,
10/10 overall enjoyment,
10/10 attractive power

Total:91/100

Review: I find this book amazing, well-written and a good change from the regular books on Wattpad. Her writing style is advanced, and she blends the suspense and drama well together. I really enjoyed this book and I really want to read more from her.

11. Imperfect Perfect Life by priya_shady

Title: 3/5,
Cover 4/5
Blurb 6/10
Plot 7/10
Originality 9/10
Characters 5/10
Grammar/Punctuation 6/10
Vocabulary/Spelling 7/10
Writing Style 8/10
Overal enjoyment 6/10
Attractive power 6/10

Total : 67/100 

It's original, and very different from the other books I've read. The main character is well-described, more detail needs to be shed on the other characters. The writing style is wonderful, I like it. The Grammar/Punctuation just needs to be worked on a little, Vocabulary is amazing. All is really needs is a little more detail, but overall, it's a very nice book, and I can't wait to read more. :)  

12. Aragons by earlfangs

Title - 4.5/5
Cover - 5/5
Blurb - 9/10


Total: 18.5+/100

So, literally 4 chapters are published on this work and none of them have the actual book in them. There’s a volume one chapter, but all that there is for me is a photo. So I’m sad to inform you that I am unable to further compile their scores, as the materials needed are missing.

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