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So finally Results time ! We congratulate all the winners and participants. You all are awesome !


A special thanks to the judges -scarletjones and Anisreadingmania
for submitting the results so soon and taking their valuable time to judge your books.

So without much delay .

          🌠  1st place 🌠

  The marriage contract by itsanaya28

          🌠 2nd place 🌠

If she knew by nabs_xoxo

          🌠 3rd place🌠

King of hearts by onegoodauthor

      🌠 Honourable mention 🌠

  As the knight falls by penpatron

SCORES OF PARTICIPANTS:

1.The Marriage Contract by itsanaya28

TITLE5
COVER5
BLURB10
PLOT9.5
ORIGINALITY10
CHARACTERS10
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION9
VOCABULARY/SPELLING9.5
WRITING STYLE9.5
OVERALL ENJOYMENT10
ATTRACTIVE POWER10

TOTAL- 97.5/100

REVIEW: - STARTING WITH THE TITLE, IT WAS ABSOLUTELY ACCORDING TO THE STORY. THE COVER IS BEAUTIFUL. BOOK COVERS ARE SOME OF THE MOST IMPORTANT ASPECTS OF A BOOK. THE COVER OF THIS BOOK SPEAKS WELL ABOUT THE STORY'S WRITING STYLE AND PLOT. FROM READING THE BLURB, I KNOW THAT THE BOOK IS GOING TO BE ABOUT THE STRUGGLES OF A GIRL AND THERE’S NO ROMANCE BETWEEN THE LEADS WHICH IS SOMETHING DIFFERENT AND YOU HAVE ADDED TWIST ALREADY WHICH IS MAKING ME KEEN TO READ IT. THIS IS NOT SOMETHING WHICH I USUALLY READ, YET I'M A BIT EXCITED TO READ IT. THE SETTING EMOTIONS AND ACTIONS ARE WELL DESCRIBED. SOME MORE PARTS NEEDED TO PROVE THE GENRE. OVERALL, I DIDN'T SPOT ANYTHING AS SUCH, MAYBE THE CHOICES OF PHRASES AND EXPRESSIONS COULD BE IMPROVED HERE AND THERE. AFTER READING IT I’M QUITE IMPRESSED WITH IT AND CANNOT STOP MYSELF FROM LIKING IT SO MUCH.

2.Anti Everything by mitalip568

TITLE4
COVER3.5
BLURB10
PLOT9.5
ORIGINALITY10
CHARACTERS10
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION8.5
VOCABULARY/SPELLING8
WRITING STYLE10
OVERALL ENJOYMENT9
ATTRACTIVE POWER10

TOTAL- 92.5/100

IT WAS A SIMPLE COVER WITH A STYLISH NAME. I WOULD LIKE TO SUGGEST YOU THAT ADD SOME GRAPHICS TO IT TO MAKE IT LITTLE MORE ATTRACTIVE FOR THE READERS. CORRECT DESCRIPTION OF STORY AS PER ATTRACTION OF READERS. IT WASN’T A UNIQUE PLOT BUT I LIKE THE UPBRINGING OF THE STORY.  IT NEEDS LITTLE IMPROVEMENTS ON PHRASES AND EXPRESSIONS USED. I HAVE NOTICED SO MUCH USAGE OF IF IF AND BUTS IN THE STORY SO TRY TO REDUCE THEM. OVERALL STORY WAS INTERESTING AND IT GRASPED MY ATTENTION.

3. A Degree in Murder by mika_mba04

TITLE5
COVER4.5
BLURB10
PLOT8
ORIGINALITY9
CHARACTERS8
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION10
VOCABULARY/SPELLING10
WRITING STYLE10
OVERALL ENJOYMENT8
ATTRACTIVE POWER9

TOTAL- 91.5/100

THE COVER AND TITLE ARE AMAZING IT REELED ME INTO THE BOOK. I LIKE ELEANOR’S CHARACTER. EXCELLENT USE OF GRAMMAR AND SPELLINGS. INTRO WAS INTERESTING BUT ENDING NEEDS SOME MORE WORK. THE STORY WAS LITTLE SLOW. A GOOD STORY OVERALL.

4.Between the Redwoods Sydneycl2050

TITLE5
COVER4
BLURB9.5
PLOT9.5
ORIGINALITY10
CHARACTERS10
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION8
VOCABULARY/SPELLING9
WRITING STYLE9
OVERALL ENJOYMENT9
ATTRACTIVE POWER9

TOTAL- 92/100

TITLE IS AMAZING. COVER IS GOOD BUT CAN BE MADE MORE ATTRACTIVE. THE STORY’S PLOT IS UNIQUE AND INTERESTING. AND YOU HAVE ADDED TWIST ALREADY WHICH IS MAKING ME KEEN TO READ IT.  HONESTLY SPEAKING, I HAVEN’T READ THIS TYPE OF BLEND BETWEEN A WIDOW AND A CRIMINAL. SOME WORK IS NEEDED FOR GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION. OVERALL, I LIKED THE STORY VERY MUCH. GREAT WORK!

5.King of Hearts by onegoodauthor

TITLE5
COVER4
BLURB9
PLOT9.5
ORIGINALITY10
CHARACTERS10
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION9
VOCABULARY/SPELLING9
WRITING STYLE10
OVERALL ENJOYMENT9.5
ATTRACTIVE POWER9.5

TOTAL- 94.5/100

NICE COVER BUT THERE’S ALWAYS A SCOPE OF IMPROVEMENTS. TITLE GIVES GOOD VIBE. WELL PLOT IS REALLY INTERESTING LIKE A MOVIE. I M IN LOVE WITH THE CHARACTER OF GEISHA REEVES. GRAMMAR IS GOOD. I’VE SPOTTED LITTLE BIT PUNCTUATION ERRORS IN THE STORY. AS I’VE STARTED READING IT GRABS MY ATTENTION FROM BEGINNING. ENJOYED IT A LOT!

6.If she knew by nabs_xoxo

TITLE5
COVER5
BLURB9.5
PLOT9.5
ORIGINALITY10
CHARACTERS10
GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION9
VOCABULARY/SPELLING9
WRITING STYLE10
OVERALL ENJOYMENT9
ATTRACTIVE POWER9

TOTAL- 95/100

COVER IS REALLY BEAUTIFUL AND THE TITLE IS VERY INTERESTING MAKING ME KEEN TO READ IT.  AESTHETICS USED ARE VERY PRETTY. WRITING STYLE IS FLAWLESS. PLOT IS REALLY INTERESTING BUT I FOUND EARLY CHAPTERS A BIT BORING. THE CHARACTERS AMY AND JONAS ARE REALLY GOOD. JONAS CHARACTER MAKES THE STORY MIRE ENJOYABLE. ALL IN ALL I ENJOYED THE BOOK.

7.Imprisoned by Secrets by MenteMelan

Title 5/5 
Cover 5/5 

Blurb 9/10 
Plot 10/10 
Originality 9/10 
Characters 10/10 
Grammar/Punctuation 8/10 
Vocabulary/Spelling 9/10 
Writing Style 9/10 
Enjoyment 10/10 
Attractive Power 9/10 

Total 93/100 

Review: I loved this book. The cover and title, YASS QUEEN SLAY! Should I use slang in a review? Whatever it's 1 a.m. and I feel like I keep writing the same thing over and over again. Your blurb was fantastic, making me want to read further in. I really thought your plot was strong, and the originality was through the roof. Your character development was some of the best I've ever seen on wattpad. The only critque I have is your grammar isn't perfect. I would suggest going back and editing your chapters before releasing them. The writing style was great and I really enjoyed it! Keep up the good work!

8.Extempore by rishabh_24

 Title 3/5 
Cover 1/5 

Blurb 4/10 
Plot 7/10 
Originality 6/10 
Characters 8/10 
Grammar/Punctuation 5/10 
Vocabulary/Spelling 5/10 
Writing Style 4/10 
Enjoyment 5/10 
Attractive Power 6/10 

Total 54/100 

 Review: The title was original, but I want more of a background on it. The cover was really bland, and it's like something that almost every wattpader has as a cover. I would recommend a graphic shop to help with that. Your blurb was too short, and had grammatical errors. Your plot was also weak, and I didn't really see any originality here. The characters will be my only compliment. I liked the development and depth of each one. The grammar and punctuation was way off in the story, and you say you use Grammarly but I caught at least 30 grammar mistakes in the book. The vocabulary range could have been wider, as many of the sentences sounded repetative. The writing style was weird. There was too much dialouge and not enough description. I didn't know who was talking after a while. Try to add imagery, because the lack of it lost my interest. For those reasons, I didn't really enjoy it, and I didn't find it moving either. I hope you take this review as a way to grow as an author and not as an insult. 

9.As the Knight Falls by penpatron

Title 5/5 
Cover 5/5 
Blurb 8/10 
Plot 9/10 
Originality 10/10 
Characters 9/10 
Grammar/Punctuation 10/10 
Vocabulary/Spelling 9/10 
Writing Style 9/10 
Enjoyment 9/10 
Attractive Power 10/10 

Total 93/100 

Review: The title and cover were perfection. They matched the story, and were eye-catching. The blurb could use a little bit of work, but I'm just being picky. I loved your plot, originality and characters! They were all great and well written, especially the original plot. The grammar was all correct, and I didn't catch one punctuation error. The vocabulary was amazing, and the spelling was a-okay! Writing style was superb, and I really enjoyed it. Great, great job!

10.Dangerous Ishqq by ThisisIRENE

 Title 2/5 
Cover 1/5 
Blurb 7/10 
Plot 6/10 
Originality 5/10 
Characters 7/10 
Grammar/Punctuation 5/10 
Vocabulary/Spelling 8/10 
Writing Style 3/10 
Enjoyment 7/10 
Attractive Power 6/10 

Total 57/100 

Review: This book isn't really my style, but I liked it. It isn't something I would say 'wow this is amazing,' but it was decent. The title was a little out there, maybe it would make more since later in the book. The cover, however, needs work. At the very least an author should have their name and title on it, then try to make it relatable to the book. I would recommend going to graphic shops, which would help plenty. The blurb was short and sweet, although I found a few grammatical errors. The plot was weak, and the lack of originality didn't help. The characters depth and development are okay, but like always, there is always room for improvement. Like the blurb, the book itself had it's share of grammar and punctuation errors. Make sure between every sentence there's a space after the period. I found spelling mistakes, but not that many. I loved the wide range of vocabulary. The writing style was not a strength. Never use media within a chapter. It's unprofessional. You can always to character aesthetics in the beginning, but never in the middle. Try to describe the outfits, that would give your book a certain imagery which really brings out an author's description strength. But, I liked it. With some editing, it could be really good. 

11.Still Alive by shhravanii

 Title 3/5 
Cover 4/5 
Blurb 5/10 
Plot 8/10 
Originality 9/10 
Characters 7/10 
Grammar/Punctuation 7/10 
Vocabulary/Spelling 8/10 
Writing Style 6/10 
Enjoyment 8/10 
Attractive Power 7/10 

Total 72/100 

Review: This book was a nice book, something different and refreshing. The title was generic, but intriguing. I liked your cover, although it looked a tad bit sloppy. The blurb however, was scattered, and gave me a headache. I didn't know where it started or ended. Put the reviews in a seperate chapter. It will fix that right up. The plot was strong, but it wasn't the first time I've seen something like it. I know I said different, but I'm just used to reading books like 'The Notebook' and 'The Outsiders' and 'To All the Boys I've Loved Before.' I liked your characters, but I felt they could've been deeper. The grammar, was well, pretty wrong. You used hyphens instead of commas, which was distracting. There were also some mistakes dealing with sentence structure, but I won't go into detail because I'm running out of characters within this PM. I liked your range of vocabulary, but I would've liked to see more. The writing style was okay, it was hard to read and was a little choppy. But overall I enjoyed it. Good job!

12.The black crown of the beast by JabreelWilson

Title 4
Cover 3
Blurb 6
Plot 6
Originality 7
Characters 9
Grammar/punctuation 6
Vocabulary/Spelling 8
Writing Style 6
Overall enjoyment 7
Attractive Power 7

Total: 69/100

The blurb really drew me in. You have a great talent for characterization and description. The tense sometimes moves from past to present, which can be confusing. Your sentence length also needs revising, to allow for more tension and flow. Overall I enjoyed your story and I wish you well on your writing journey.

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