Review#12

Written by A_book_Lover3456
Reviewed by moonkissedgirl
Aka Damion

Whew where to start? 😅 I think this is a really great book in all honesty. I must say, I've never been a fan of the billionaire type romance but this one actually had me shipping Noah and Jess. She's a sassy girl and he's a calm alpha-type male and I think they would make a dynamic duo. My enjoyment has to be a 8/10 or higher!

Cover:

The cover is so so cute! Sweet, and cute but there's only one problem. It doesn't fit the type of book A Love So Beautiful is. When I saw that cover, I automatically assumed it was a small-town romance. Cuz that's exactly what the cover looks like, but it's not that at all. The cover is adorable though. ☺️

Plot:

The plot is great in my opinion. At first it was a little hard for me to keep up with but I believe it's mainly due to the fact that it was early in the morning and I had a headache when I was reading. So keep up the good work!

I do understand that English ain't your first language, so writing this book in English is a challenge for you. I admire the fact that you're doing it. It says a lot about you as a person. You have some grammatical errors and such but it is to be expected. Heck, even us who has English as our first language have those. It's just natural.

Improvement:

The only improvement I can see besides keep studying that English and mastering it (don't worry girl you're gonna do great!) is adding a tad more description as to what they're doing, their surroundings, and how they're feeling. You have some which is great but I'm some parts you didn't and it felt a tad lacking but that's okay, we all have those areas at times.

I must say that my favorite line is in Chapter 5, "He was like a heater which was unknowingly warming my heart." That seriously stuck with me and if Wattpad still let us have the quote art option I'd have made one. Gosh it was so cute and relatable.

Thank you so much for choosing me as a reviewer, it means a lot to me. Like, who would choose this girl? 😂🤷 But seriously, thank you.

Thank you so much for choosing me as a reviewer, it means a lot to me. Like, who would choose this girl? 😂🤷 But seriously, thank you.

With love,

Damon Salvatore ❤️

(moonkissedgirl)