Review#28

Written by nwrittenthoughts
Reviewed by Lone_Wolf-
Aka Hope

Cover:
The cover really suits the blurb of the book. And if someone is looking for a good psychological murder mystery, it is definitely eye catching.

Title:
Lie to Me Again, is pretty eye catching. The book is not completed yet so I don't know why it has come up yet. But I'm sure I'll keep reading your book further.

Blurb:
The blurb is amazing! It was the perfect blend of mystery and suspense. I would say you gave up a little more information than required but it made the blurb even more suspenseful.

Grammar:
There ware very little and minor spelling mistakes which isn't that big of a problem unless you are entering it in a huge contest. It gets a little confusing when you talk about psychology but it makes it all the more interesting.

Overall:
I highly recommend to put up trigger warnings at the end of the blurb and the starting of the chapters when something is mentioned . For example, you could put up an abuse warning in the chapter 8 and a self harm warning in chapter 11, you can ask readers to direct message you for the summary when you do nor want to lose readers. Besides that, the writing and your way with words is very inspiring. It is obviously that you have done research on the topics before writing them. The email, Theo arriving and Kian's secrets pushed me to read and I may or may not have added it to my reading list😉

Lone_Wolf-