Review#25

Written by Lil-Bird
Reviewed by SelenaJones_Vampires
Aka Lizzie

This book is pretty nice. Really love how you start the story and your word choice. I love how Stephanie's name is revealed in dialogue and you tell she feels and in just the first chapter you get to know why she's working a job. 

Improvements:

Your story could use a little improvement. I would think the only one would be the end of the first chapter. I get the idea but the way it's written... it doesn't really come through. I think that the pacing of it was a little fast and your chapter could have been longer if you'd put a little more description into how Stephanie was feeling when Mike died. That's about it because I don't see any grammar or spelling mistakes!

Hope this helped and thanks for choosing me as your reviewer! It means so much to me! ❤️

-Selena (SelenaJones_Vampires )