Review#21

Written by incen_dia
Reviewed by moonkissedgirl
Aka Damon

Wow. Just wow. There's a lot about this book I loved, especially the humor and description. A definite 10/10 for my own personal enjoyment.

I think the cover is very nicely done and relates to the story well. Your grammar was near perfect, even though English ain't your first language. Which, if I may say, is impressive. The book so far is very fast paced and quite suspenseful. I think the plot is very nice and I can't wait to see how you work it out.

However, there's a few things I would like to point out. Offsetting the dialogue with ' instead of " makes it very hard to keep up with. I had a hard time distinguishing the story from the dialog a lot of times. The next thing, and I believe is the most important, is the fact that you don't have trigger warnings or any kind of warnings for the content you have. When a book has cursing, it is usually marked as mature and/or has a warning in the description because some folks don't want to read a book with foul language. If you do have this, I was not aware of it. 😅 Also, you absolutely need to have a trigger warnings for what Thunder goes through. We all know she had been raped, and the violent acts she went through are very huge triggers for some people. It hit me unexpectedly so I can just imagine what it would be like to those whom this sort of content triggers.

But seriously, this book was amazing with all that I read of it. You're doing a great job, just please, please put a warning in the description or the beginning of your book. Keep up the great work, and thank you so much for requesting me as your reviewer.

With love,

Damon Salvatore ❤️

(moonkissedgirl)