Review#19

Written by DoraDorci
Reviewed by dallas1213
Aka Katherine

Chapter one:
So I saw that you started off the chapter with Valerie having a dream and well normally when the character as a dream you normally use this font 'thanks' and it just gives the reader a head ups that it is a dream, thought, etc.

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And I also feel that there is a lack of details.

(But this is also just my personal opinion, and your book is still good❤ so please don't take any of this personal)

Chapter two:
Your plot is strange but in a good way, the reason I find it interesting, strange is because you have it like it's in the eighteen hundreds, but then Valerie has a duffel bag and clearly duffel bags were not in the eighteen hundreds. You also have witches, vampires and werewolves in your plot, and I LOVE paranormal things so obviously I'm interested❤

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Your plot is really good:)
But I just wish there was more details...

Chapter three:
So when they said she is a 'powerful witch' I started feeling cliche vibes and normally I don't like reading books that give me that 'cliche' vibe, but since I like your plot and so I am just going brush that cliche feeling off.

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Also, when Willa told Valerie to light the candle with her mind, well when Valerie was lighting the candle you should have added more details.

(But let again this is just my personal opinion and your book is still amazing❤)

Cover: 6/10
Plot: 13/15
Grammar: 10/10
Spelling: 10/10
Personal enjoyment: 7/10

So the only thing I will suggest is maybe adding more details to the plot, just because at times when I was reading the book, I felt confused and sometimes that might throw a reader off. But other than that, your book is really, really good❤

Thank you for giving me this opportunity to review your book❤

Have a wonderful day/night❤✨

-Katherine.