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THE DEAD MISTRESS by PeherKothari

The title was interesting and relevant to the story so you deserve full marks for the domain. The cover wasn't much attractive and needed some development, using many of the pictures spoilt its effect. The blurb did explain the whole plot but some development was needed, never mind we can make it up.

About the genre, it did match up with the plot , however I felt it was lacking somewhere. The catch was used at the right place and you're indeed a good thinker. The usage of the word wasn’t much clear to me. You haven't used the proper word but the meaning was used. Grammar, Narration, description, plot and dialogues were cherry on the top. But the character development is lacking much , but I do agree that the word count couldn't help much better. So yeah, that's alright too. You've done a great thing , firstly, active participation in the contest is really good , moreover you've given your best and I found the piece of yours, amazing.

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STARCROSSED LOVERS by wallflower_words

The story was splendid. I was really amazed with your writing skills. However, title needs to be concentrated, the fonts used in the cover ain't appreciative. The blurb was crystal clear. The genres were used flawlessly. You've got great thinking and writing abilities, keep writing!

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THE PATH TO NOWHERE by niyati2701

You've got great thinking ability and you used it well. The story was unique and easy to understand. I really loved it. However, the title could've been more unique and attractive. The cover, the warrior on the cover was really an important thing that you've got the mark. But the font wasn't much appreciative. Blurb was very thrilling so you deserve full Mark's in the criteria. You've covered both the genres flawlessly. But the word wasn’t used, though you used the meaning, you could've used the word too. All in once, it's amazing!

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