Three shot on shivi ...

The track is based on haveli track where kesar kand happened but a totally different track in my way 😉😉

You will definitely love it agar na lage toh bhi batana 😊

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Shiva and krish were successful in scaring the hell out of rishita by reciting the ghost story of kesar in the haveli and to make it real they even played a prank on her like shiva danced on classical music while krish roamed around her room making weird noises like breaking of glass, banging of windows , making her know that if she will trouble anyone she will be killed etc in white saree white creamy face and a candle in his hand .. when they were sure she is hell scared they felt satisfied with it and left towards their respective rooms to have a good night sleep ...

two days it was very good like a bright sun as that Ameer baap ki beti rishita didn't fuss around any of the family member so watching this shiva and krish were happy that making her scared was great idea now everything will be in place but who knows that they have to face the worst tonight..

That night was so dark it was no moon day and it was raining from early morning .. the thunderstorm was hurling in the sky ... As raavi was a bit scared of it she had already decided that she will stay near her family anyhow ... The whole day passed away by playing , making food, making lists for Pooja , telling and listening old memories that they made before marriage etc .. indeed it was most beautiful day but by the time it was night the dark night she shivered as if feeling something big gonna happen ..

Shiva saw raavi laying down clueless and scared ..

Shiva : oye chipkali itna kya dar rahi hai subha se haan sabhi yahi hai kuch nhi hoga tuja .. main toh yahi hun muja pata hai tuja thunderbolt se dar lagta hai per jab tak yeh Bhoothnath tera pass hai tuja kisi se Darna ki zarurat nhi hai .. yahi decide hua tha na toh fizal ki baat mat soch aur so jaa hmm ...

Raavi : Bhoothnath decide toh yahi Kiya tha per dar nhi Jaa raha hai mera .. ek baat bolu bura toh nhi manega na ? She asked with so much hope that shiva didn't able to refuse her request..

Shiva : haan bol kya bolna hai ?

Raavi : kya main aaj tuja hug kar ke so jau ?.. pakka bilkul pareshan nhi karungi tuja .. she said with scared eyes ..

Shiva : ummm chal itna keh rahi hai toh aaj ke liya maan leta hun per kal ke liya yeh offer valid nhi hai samjhi ?

Raavi : haan theek hai .. to give him her thanks she out of blue kissed his cheek 😘..

Shiva with shock : yeh yeh .. kya kar ri hai chipkali .. chumma chaati mat kar warna dur reh ke so ..

Raavi giggled: okay mera pyare Bhoothnath jaisa teri marzi maine excitement main aake tuja kiss kar di ..

Shiva : haan haan theek hai ab dubara mat karna ..

Raavi : okay sir .. said with a cute pout ..

Then they both laid together hugging each other..

It was past 12 when raavi felt very thirsty so she got up slowly so as she don't wake up shiva ..

She took her phone saw the time it was showing 1:30 am .. she saw the jug was empty.. she sighed..

Raavi : ab kya karun 🤔🤔 .. isse uthau kya ? Nhi nhi sirf pani ke liya isko uthana theek nhi hoga .. abhi toh kitna pyar se so Raha hai uthaya toh gussa karega .. chal raavi uth khud hi Jake le aa pani tuja yaad hai na shiva ne kya bola tha darne ki zarurat nhi hai sab tera hai .. she braced herself to go and fetch water ..

Here rishita who has planned to scare raavi as she was feeling insulted just because of her and she was also feeling insecurity that she will take her husband away from her so as to boast her ego and insult she got from this family she was now going to take revenge on her for everything.. she was just waiting for raavi to come out of her room as she knows every day she comes out of her room at this period of time.. she has a good opportunity to make raavi know that she can do anything and everything to keep her away from her dev .. she was all ready in kesar get up .. she looked evil in that look ..

Raavi was unaware what hell is going to break on her today ..

Family was unaware of the bad fate going to occur in with their favourite child ..

Shiva was unaware of the evil plan of rishita that will cost his wife's life .

Dev was oblivious to the things his wife was going to do with the pure soul just to satisfy her ego , whose life is now is at stake .

As soon as raavi came out she was a bit scared due to darkness all over the area stretched in front of her . She closed her eyes and gathered a lot of himmat in her and opened it .. raavi with a determined face marched towards the kitchen.. raavi reached and drank a lot of water and some tit bits of sweets with was kept in fridge as she was feeling little bit of sweet craving.. then she carried full jug of water and left the kitchen as soon as she was in a secluded area rishita got alert and took her position to scare her as raavi forgot from where she came from she tremble in fear but she didn't stop walking..

Out of blue rishita came in front of her and acted like a ghost 👻 due to fear jug fell from her hand and shattered into pieces and raavi screamed on the top of her voice and fell in the glass pieces making it Perce her soft skin..

Watching raavi can't breathe properly and wasn't able to speak rishita got scared and fled away in her room to get herself change ..

Here hearing a scream all got up and ran towards the place where they heard a scream .. shiva was worried because when he got up his chipkali wasn't in his arms ..

There all saw raavi struggling to breathe and speak but couldn't she was feeling so helpless while the tears of pain was cascading down her eyes..

Shiva watching her immediately ran towards her and engulfed her in his protective arms .. raavi hugged tightly in fear ..

Shiva : raavi idhar dekh yeh sab kaisa hua ? Kya hua hai tu chillai kyun bata toh kuch toh bol ? He was so worried for her that he couldn't see her in this condition..

Raavi tried to speak to him but the words weren't coming out but her throat was paining breath wasn't normal.. she was feeling drowsy and in seconds she was fainted in his arms ..

Shiva screamed.. raaaaaaaaaaaaaaviiiiiiiiiiiiiii while others were shocked to see her like this ..

By this time Devta were also there .

Shiva : raavi uth na please uth na dekh merko esa mazal bilkul pasand nhi hai.. dekh main janta hun tu mujha pareshan karne ke liya esa kar rahi hai na please uth ja ... He cried .. tears weren't stopping looking at his wife unconscious..

Dhara : shiva esa kuch hoga tu ... Tu esa kar isse room main leke Jaa main tab tak doctor ko phone karti hun ...

Gautam : haan shiva jaa leja raavi ko ..

Shiva : hmm per jisne bhi meri chipkali ke sath yeh kiya hai na I will kill him 😡 how dare that person do such a crime .. yaad rakhna sab ek baar raavi ko hosh aane do kisiko nhi chodunga jaan le lunga uski .. he practically breathed fire 🔥 eyes read like lava ..

Krish : shiva bhai tu pehle bhabhi ko room main leja unhe hosh main lana ki koshish kar tab tak main doctor ko leke aata hun .. phir hum mil ker usse pakdenga jisne bhi yeh kahani ya hai ..

Shiva didn't said anything and picked raavi in his arms and went towards their room .. while krish dhara and Gautam tried many doctors but due to weather conditions there was low network 😕..

Dhara : Gaumbi phone toh lag hi nhi raha hai raavi ki halat bigadti jaa rahi hai aur uske sath sath shiva ka gussa bhi . Tum toh jante ho na raavi ko zara sa bhi kuch ho jata hai toh shivji ki tarah uska tandav shuru ho jata hai .. ab agar raavi ko jaldi hosh nhi aaya toh shiva puri haveli toh kya pura gajner ko aag laga dega .. please jaldi kuch karo .. she said in worried tone .

Krish : haan gaumbi shiva is wakt apna gussa ko peena ko koshish kar raha hai sirf tab tak jab tak doctor nhi aa jata .. ab agar jaldi doctor nhi aaya aur good news nhi di toh pata nhi is duniya ka kya hoga aur jisne bhi raavi bhabhi ke sath yeh kiya hai uski jaan bhi abhi hi na chali jayee please hum esa karta hai khud doctor ko lene chalta hai ..

Gaumbi: haan yeh sahi hoga .. dhara dev tum dono shiva aur raavi ka dhayan rakho hum doctor ko leker aata hai ..

Dhara : ji gaumbi.. tum bhi dhyan rakhna aur jaldi aana ..

Both left to bring doctor home ..

After what felt like hours doctor was ready to go with them and with in one hour they reached haveli ...

In meanwhile shiva

Shiva : raavi please uth na dekh tu jo bolegi na main wahi karunga please 🥺 tu.. tu mera sath esa nhi kar sakti .. tu janti hai na tera Bhoothnath apni chipkali ke bina adhura hai .. tu ... Tune pr.. pro.. promise kiye tha ki tu kabhi phir se esa kuch nhi karegi phir kyun ? Aur yeh kisne kiya tera sath ? Muja bata na main na uski jaan le lunga .. tu na pehle merko uth ke yeh bata ki tu bhar karne kya gai thi itni raat ko ? Uth na yrr bas both jo gaya ab .. shiva cried more ...

Here rishita was very scared to see shiva this much angry and Raavi's worsening condition.. she thought in her mind ..

Rishita : agar raavi uth gai aur usko pata chal gaya hoga ki voh main thi toh voh shiva ko aur sab ko bata degi aur shiva ne toh dhamki bhi di hai ki voh raavi ko esi halat karne wale ki jaan lega .. ab main kya karu hey somnath 🙏 please muja bacha lo maine yeh sab gussa aur insecurity main kiya tha muja nhi pata tha raavi ki halat esi hi jayegi Main toh bas use darana chahti thi ..

Soon krish gaumbi and doctor came due to commotion her thoughts broke ..

Dhara : gaumbi aa gaye tum .. doctor kaha ?

Doc : main yaha hun aap fikr mat kijiye aap muja patient ke pass leke chaliya ..

Dhara: ji doc aaiya is taraf ..

They reached outside Shiva's room where he was giving her massage so that she could get warmth and may open her eyes but nothing was working..

Dhara : shiva doctor aa gai hai tu bhar aaja voh dekh lengi kya hua hai..

Shiva : doctor aai per main bhar nhi Jaa raha hun apko jo test karne hai mera samne kariya ..

Dhara : per shiva .....

Shiva showed her his palm to stay quiet 🤫..

Doctor: it's okay mr pandya aap ruk sakta hai per baaki sabko bhar Jana hoga ..

All nodded and waited outside with heavy breathing..

Doctor checked and told shiva

Doctor: Mr pandya inhe koi shock laga tha ya sadma aaya tha kisi baat ka ? Any idea ?

Shiva : kyaaaa shock 😲 ? Nhi doctor pata nhi muja toh kyuki raavi raat tak toh mera pass hi so Rahi thi per achanak se bhar se cheekhna ki awaz aai thi aur us wakt raavi mera pass nhi thi jab main Gaya tab raavi saans Lena aur bolna main bhut takleef ho rahi thi aur baar baar apna gala pakad rahi thi jaisa maano uske gala main bhut dard ho phir achanak se voh behosh ho gai phir dekhta dekhta voh neeli padhna lagi aur shareer bhi thanda ho raha hai.. kya baat hai doctor please saaf saaf bataiya raavi theek toh hai na ?muja bhut dar lag raha hai..

Doctor: dekhiya mr pandya apki wife ko gehra sadma shock ya kuch bhi kahiya voh bhut high intensity ka tha jo dar ki wajh se hota hai.. shayad yeh kisi cheez ko dekh ker bhut dar gai thi jiske karan yeh chakar aaya aur inke cheekhna ke wajh se unki vocal cords thoda weak ho gaye hai jiske karan voh bol nhi paa rahi per bolna ki koshish karna per inhe dard hota hai .. toh apko inke vocal cords ke kuch sessions dilane honga aur mental health bhi theek rakhni hogi agar nhi toh Inka dar ke karan yeh kabhi bol bhi nhi payengi iss liya main kehti hun psychiatrist aur vocal cords therapist ke pass le jaaiya jisa yeh theek ho jayengi aur haan zada teekha tala hua aur khati cheeza mat dena bilkul sada khana Dena aur ho sake toh solid nhi patla khana like easy to eat .. aur haan esa ek aur rasta bhi hai jissa ya toh Inka shock wave backfire ho sakta hai aur voh theek bhi ho sakti hai lekin agar voh kaam nhi kiya toh inki jaan bhi jaa sakti hai as Inka mind bhut fragile hai ab itna shock seh nhi payega .. Inka bhut ache se bilkul bache ki tarah dhayan rakhna hoga .. bilkul akele mat chodna ..

Shiva : okay doctor jaisa aap bologa vesa hi hoga per dusra tareeka kya hai ? Main Janna chahta hun voh bhi ..

Doctor: voh yeh hai ki agar inhe dusra shock 😲 similar toh what she had witnessed will do the work but it's very difficult and has 50-50 chances to bring your wife back to a normal state .. maine fhilhal inhe drip laga di hai aur ek injection bhi laga diya hai .. subha jaisa hi hosh aata hai aap inhe sabse pehla khana khila Dena phir Jo medicines likhi hai voh lake khula Dena she needs rest specially mental rest. Aur agar phir bhi subha medicine lene ke baad bhi kuch problem ho toh aap hospital le aana main phir se proper check kar lungi .. ab main chalti hun ..

Shiva : thank you doctor.. aaiya main apko chod deta hun bhar tak ..

Doctor: ji shukriya ..

When the doctor and shiva came they bombarded the question to her .. and she told the same to family they were unhappy hearing about her health 😔..

Gautam: aaiya doctor main aapko chod deta hun .. then he left to drop her at her clinic..

Dhara : shiva tu tension mat le tuja strong rehna hoga raavi ke liya .. tu kamzor padh Gaya toh raavi ko kon sambhalega..

Shiva : haan bhabhi aap sahi ho .. muja raavi ke liya strong rehna hai.. bhabhi ek kaam karo muja gaumbi ka laptop laake dedo .. kuch kaam hai.

Dhara : jo bhi kaam hai voh subha kar Lena abhi tu bhi rest kar le..

Shiva : bhabhi please bhut important hai muja abhi neend nhi aayegi ..

Dhara nodded and all went to their respective rooms when gaumbi came and gave shiva Raavi's medicine and said

Gaumbi: shiva tu tension mat le hum sab mil ker raavi ka dhayan rakhenga aur uska bhi pata kar lenga jisne raavi ke sath galt kiya hai..

Shiva : hmm bas ek baar pata chal jaate kon hai voh badnaseeb insaan jisko apni zindagi barbad karna ka itna shaunk hai uski zindagi khatam kar dunga main .

Dhara : shiva yeh le laptop.. per zada der tak kaam mat karna warna subha uth nhi paaoga ..

Shiva : thank you bhabhi..

Gautam: iska kya kaam karna hai tuja itni raat ko .. ?

Shiva in mind: us badnaseeb insaan ka pata jisne raavi ko maut ke ghat utarna ki jusrat ki hai per apko nhi bata sakta aap meri feelings ko nhi samajh paoga ki kitni tadap kitni takleef ho rahi hai mujha is wakt ..

Gautam: bol na kya kaam hai iska ?

Shiva : ummm .... Gaumbi voh doctor ne bola tha ki raavi ko sadma laga hai aur vocal cords affect hua hai toh neend toh aayegi nhi toh socha thoda iske baare main research kar lun shayad main aur khul ker raavi ki help kar paunga ..

Gautam: theek hai .. apna aur raavi ka dhayan rakhna.. hun chalta hai ..

Shiva : ji gaumbi ..

Gaumbi: chal dhara

Then shiva went to his room while gaura went to their...

Coming inside he opened the CCTV camera 📸 of while haveli ..

He watched every photage and then he found at 1:30 am raavi went out of their room with a jug of water while rishita to came out with the get up of a chudail ..

Shiva suspected something fishy that may be just may be she did something to his raavi but didn't have any proof ..

Then he saw raavi went to have water while on the other side he saw rishita hiding where they found raavi unconscious.. there he saw raavi had lost her track and went where rishita was and then he saw what he feared the most .. he saw rishita scaring Raavi till hell came on her back .. as soon as she saw her condition she fled to her room and came changing back to where everyone was ..

Shiva was so angry that he could go and burn her alive but he had to control his anger till morning and raavi wakes up ..

Shiva : yeh tune theek nhi kiya Ameer baap ki beti ab tuja mujhse koi nhi bacha sakta teri himmat badh gai ki tu shiva pandya ki biwi ki jaan lena ki koshish kare .. you are gone Mrs dev pandya ... Bas kuch wakt aur ... Tuja kya laga muja pata nhi chalega tuna kya kiya hai hmmm sab log bhale hi befcoof ho main nhi hun ..

Then he closed the laptop and layed besides raavi while looking at her he didn't know when sleep took over him .

Next morning..

Subha ke 9 baje ..

Shiva woke up and saw raavi laying like a lifeless body with drip on her hand ..

A tear rolled down his eyes .. he swiftly wiped them and kissed Raavi's forehead and said ..

Shiva : chipkali jaldi se uth jaa na yrr ... Teri bakbak ki itni aadat ho gai hai na ki ab yeh sunnaapan aur chupi katna ko daudh raha hai..

Then he went to get ready .. he wore Raavi's favourite black shirt which she gifted him just before coming to haveli ..

Shiva : dekh na chipkali teri favourite shirt pehni hai aaj maine .. tune hi bola tha na ki tu muja isme dekhna chahti hai toh dekh na kuch toh bol please 🥺😭..

From far away rishita saw a devastated shiva .. from inside she was definitely scared but was happy too to see shiva broken and raavi lying lifeless while others in a gloom but from outside she was definitely showing that she is also worried from shiva and raavi so that nobody could suspect her .

But who knows that what's gonna happen when shiva will come out of his room and spit fire on her .. she will be doomed like a raakh ..

Shiva in room talked to raavi some more and wiped his tears and once again kissed her forehead.. and came in dining room .

As soon as he saw rishita his blood boiled as he remembered how she scared his raavi out of her wits ..

He tried to calm his racing anger 🤬 but couldn't..

All worriedly asked shiva about raavi but he didn't listen to them and went towards dev .. as he know he can't touch rishita because he respects women .. ab gussa kahin toh nikalna hi hai na apna taki baat saaf sapasht shabdon main bol sake ..

He stood up in front of dev and slapped so hard that he fell down with his hand print on his cheeks .. he wasn't stopping he was beating him brutally.. it was as if he will kill him if not stopped right now ..

Gaumbi came in between shiva and dev looking at gaumbi he stopped his beating ..

Gaumbi: shiva tu pagal ho gaya hai kya kya kar rahe ho ? Kyun maar raha hai isse ?kya kiya hai isne Jo itna Peet raha hai ?

Shiva sighed and said gaumbi isne ek jallad se shadi hai yeh hai iski galti iski biwi ne meri biwi ki jaan leni chahi yeh hai iski galti . Ab main iski biwi ko toh Peet nhi sakta na toh iski biwi ka gussa issi per hi utarunga na . And kicked him hard on his but 😑.

Rishita : tum pagal ho gaye ho main kyun tumhari biwi ko marungi muja kya milaga usse mar ker .. aur main koi jallad nhi hun .. aur due raho tum mera dev se kitna maara hai usse . Tum jaisa jahil gawar unpadh se aur umeed bhi kya ki jaa sakti hai. Jab apni biwi ko protection nhi de paate toh apna nakamyabi ki mohar parcha mujh per aur dev per nikal rahe ho . Hadh hai shiva tum na kabhi nhi sudhar sakta humesha jahil ke jahil hi rahoga biwi marne ko padi hai aur yaha tum use chod ker apna bhai aur bhabhi per ghinona ilzaam laga rahe ho aur uper se Peet bhi rahe ho . Wow just wow ..

Shiva saw an audacity of this girl no jallad who first tried to kill his wife by scaring her becoming a ghost and now she is lecturing him and even saying that his wife is going to die how dare she ..

Shiva : bas rishita bhabhi bas bhut hui apki bakwas .. how dare you try to kill my wife how dare you .. apki himmat kaisa hui . Pehle use marne ki koshish ki aur ab muja dhamki de rahi ho . Yeh log per vishwas karta honga apki in khokhlo baaton se darta honga per main shiva pandya hun shiva mahakal ka bhakt voh shiva jo hell ka raja se kam nhi hai ..

agar main chahu toh aapko issi wakt apke pati ke sath gujrat ke bhar phikwa sakta hun . Ek baat bolu apka yeh nalla pati hai na pandya pariwar aur mera ehsaan ke bina kuch bhi nhi hai .. isse sirf Galla chalana aata hai aur kuch nhi per main puri dukaan chalata hun .. bhale hi main college nhi Gaya per maine school ke 12th std main 1st position li thi voh bhi non medical main aur yeh nalla ne commerce jisme isne 5th position li thi toh bhi maine iski khushi na cheenta hua apni khushi ko chod ker isse padhna diya .

Apni barbadi maine khud apne haathon se likhi taki yeh Ghar chal sake yeh do bjai aage padh sake taki maa ka treatment ache se ho sake gaumbi aur dhara bhabhi ki zimmedari kam ho sake jo cheez isko karni chahiya thi voh main 12 saal ki umar main seekhi aur school khatam hone tak usper Amal bhi kiya .

Aaj afsoos hota hai is baat per ki 1st position Lana ka baad bhi nahi padha main padh leta toh aaj bada business man hota aur meri biwi nokaron ki tarah nhi MAHARANI ki tarah reh Rahi hoti . Arey humse somnath se pandya ka naam apne naam se hata kar kaam karna phir pata chalegi tumhe apni aukaat .

Aur ehsaan maano ki maine isse padhna diya warna tum apne padhe likha gawar unpadh pati ko kaisa milti . Ehsaan maano raavi ka ki usne tumhe tumhara nalla pati bheekh main daan kar diya .. main bhut khush kismat hun ki muja meri raavi mili mujhse shadi ki . Bhut khush hun uske sath dil se khush hun ki voh iski nhi meri jholi main aai hai . Aur jo mera hai voh main kisi aur ka hone nhi deta .

Kya laga tha Mrs dev pandya ki tum kuch karogi aur muja pata nhi chalega sorry but not sorry jo tumne kiya hai na voh tumne apni baat se bata kiya ki tum kon ho .. thodi si izzat thi tumhari meri aankhon main ki chalo bhai ki biwi hai ek na ek din toh is pariwar ki ho hi jayegi ek mauka deke dekhta hun per nhi I was so wrong agar usi din tum dono ko Dhaka maar ke apna ghar se bhar phek diya hota toh wahi acha hota .

Aaj kamse kam meri biwi maut aur zindagi ke beech jhul nhi rahi hoti . Aur tum meri biwi ki tension mat lo usko zinda kaisa karna hai main dekh lunga tum kaisa bachogi yeh batao . Dikha di na apni aukat jo do kaudi bhi nhi hai bilkul apne baap per gai hai voh bhi kisi ko bhi apna rasta se kaisa bhi kar ke hata deta hai aur wahi nakshe kadam per uski jahil beti chal rahi hai .

Vese sahi kaha hai kisi ne jo bache jo mahol dekta hai usme bade hota hai wahi toh banta hai bade hoker .. muja toh sharam aati hai is aadmi ko apna Bhai bolta hai . Meri biwi ne yeh mazak main bhi yeh harkat ki hoti na sab usper Dana Pani lekar Chad jati uski izzat nilam kar deta per yaha toh yeh ameerzadi ne kiya hai na toh sabke hoth sil Gaye Hai vese bhi iske pati ki zuban toh khulti nhi hai iske samne toh kisi aur se kya hi expect Karun .

Anyways I know sab log soch rahe honga ki sabut kya hai mera pass saboot hai ..

Dev : kya bakwas hai yeh shiva meri biwi esi harkat kabhi nhi karegi tu usse itni berehmi se baat nhi kar sakta .. chal maafi maang usse .

Shiva : tsk tsk tsk tsk.. kitna bhola massom hai na tu tuja toh apni biwi ki fitrat ke baare main bhi nhi pata hai .. arey teri biwi ko toh maine shadi Wale din hi samajh liya tha ki kis type ki nasal ki hai yeh .. anyways tu saboot dekh le phir kehna kon kisse maafi mangenga ..

Dhara about to speak but shiva glared at her and said ..

Shiva : dhara bhabhi apko aur gaumbi ko meri aur raavi ki chinta na ho aur shayad farak bhi na pade agar hum dono mar bhi jayenga toh per muja bhut farak padega agar maine aap logon ko galti se bhi dukh diya toh .. toh kuch bolna ki zarurat nhi hai sach dekh lo uske baad decide karna ki kon sach bol raha hai aur kon jhoot .. aur yaha apko pata hai main jhoot se nafrat karta hun ..

Then he brought laptop from the table and opened the CCTV camera and showed them live what rishita did with raavi ..

All gasped watching the photage .. they looked at rishita with sheer anger ..

Dev : rishitaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa how dare you do this with raavi . Voh mera bhai ki biwi hai for God sake tum uske hath dhoke peecha kyun padh gai ho muja samaj nhi aata . Jab voh bol chuki hai ki usse mujhme koi interest nhi hai voh uski bhool thi ki voh mujse pyar karti hai per shiva se shadi karne baad use realise hua ki voh mera liya kuch feel nhi karti hai phir bhi tumne yeh ghinona kaam kiya cheee rishita cheee .. tum esa kuch bhi kar sakti ho maine kabhi socha bhi nhi tha .. tumhe apni biwi kehta hua bhi sharam aa rahi hai aaj . Acha kiya shiva ne muja Peeta main isse layak hun .. aaj agar voh meri jaan bhi Lena chahiga toh nhi rokunga main kyuki meri galti ko saza raavi ko bin baat ke mil rahi hai .

Dhara came forward and slapped rishita and says Chee rishita maine yeh umeed nhi ki thi tumse .. dhokebaaz ke sath yahi hona chahiye chali jaao humari zindagi se dur ..

Gaumbi : you are a failure rishita ..

Krish : main kya bolu apko bolker main apni zuban gandi bhi nhi karna chahta .. apko dekh ker bhi ghin aa rahi hai.

Shiva : nikal gai sari akad ho gaya izzat ka faluda .. ab chal bata kyun kiya yeh sab jaldi wakt nhi hai mera pass ..

Rishita crying : main .. maine use marne ke Ira.. irade se nhi kiya sab .. voh ... Voh toh ... Main ...

Shiva : ehh chup bilkul chup ek toh rona band kar aur bakri ki tarah mat bol Saaf sapasht bhasha main fatafat bol .. teri main main nhi suna baitha yaha ..

Rishita wiped her tears drank water and stared saying feeling scared at Shiva's glare on her .

Rishita : voh main usse khush dekh ke hal jati thi uske wajh se dev muja aur use compare karta tha puri family use pyar deti hai Jaan chidakti hai tum bhi usko time deta the jabki tum dono ek dusre se nafrat karta ho aur jabardasti Shafi hui thi tumhari aur us din sabke samne raavi ne meri insult bhi ki thi jab maine uske pass pyar na hone ke baare main bola tha .. main yeh sari insults seh nhi paai isliya jab tum aur krish kesar ke baare main baat kar rahe the tab sun liya tha maine toh tabhi soch liya tha ki raavi ko main sabak sikha ker rahungi per main nhi janti thi ki raavi ki jaan per baat aa jayegi main bas use sabak sikhana chahti thi . I am sorry shiva 😔..

All were amazed at her reasons but shiva was even more angry ..

Shiva : wah kya baat hai mera aur raavi ke rishta ka baare main bhut janti ho tum .. arey akal se paidal insaan kabhi kisi se puch liya hota ki mera aur raavi ka rishta kya hai tab tumhe samajh aata.. nafrat huh kabhi thi hi nhi ek compitition tha ek dusre ke beech main nafrat ke naam per aur forced marriage nhi thi humari .. dono ki dil se Raza Mandi thi bhale hi family ke liya shadi ki thi humne per dil se accept kar ker hi shadi ki thi .. tum logo ki tarah dhoka nhi diya ek dusre ko . Jo bhi hai khuli kitab ki tarah hai hum ek dusre ke liya . Tum jaisi ehsaan faramosh insaan ko meri yeh baat kaha hi samajh aayengi ..

Rishita : please muja ek aur mauka dedo main sabke sath jaisa tum chahoga wese reh lungi please 🥺..

Shiva : kabhi nhi .. tu yaha sirf tab tak hai jab tak yeh path khatam nhi ho jata somnath jaate hi tu aur tera pati rafu chakar ho jana gujraat se hi agar mujha Tum log Gujarat ke kisi bhi Kona main mil gaye toh wahi zinda dafan kar dunga tum logon ko . Main hi janta hun ki kaisa bardasht karunga tum dono ko apni aankon ke samne jab tak maa ko sach pata nhi chal jata . Pata nhi maami kaisa react karegi jab use pata chalega ki uski beti ki yeh halat ho gai hai aur main kuch nhi kar paya .

Then shiva went to kitchen and started making vegetable soup for raavi .. and all followed him and dhara said main bana deti hun shiva tu haa raavi ke pass ..

Shiva : koi zarurat nhi hai mera pass you tube hai main usme se dekh ker raavi ke liya khana bana liya karunga ab muja kisi per bhi bharosa nhi hai sivay khud ke.. so aap sab dur hi raho .. then shiva made soup for her and himself silently.

A were sad that shiva has secluded them from him and raavi .

As soon as shiva entered in the room he saw raavi gaining conciousness he immediately went to her and keeping the bowl aside he hugged her .

Raavi looked at him and then at the room .. soon she remembers what happened last night and tears came out of her eyes 😭.. she even tried to say but words were coming out as if her voice wasn't in her favour .

Shiva : shhh bilkul shant kuch nhi hua hai main hun na .. aur rahi baat na bol pane ki toh tera na gala baith gaya hai toh thoda dukhega aur khud din bol nhi payegi tu per hum doctor ke pass jayenga na treatment ke liya phir dekhna tera yeh speaker phir se theek ho jayega .. ab bata kaisa laga raha hai? kahi dukh toh nhi raha na? doctor ko bulau ?

Raavi nodes in no .. and in action says okay okay she is feeling and head is paining. Shiva understand her action and says ..

Shiva : hmm main bhabhi ko bulata hun tuja voh nehla dengi phir tu soup pi Lena aur phir medicine Lena hmm

Raavi stoped him in fear .. and says no ..

Shiva : raavi kuch nhi hoga dhara bhabhi hi hai .. but she refused.. acha ruk tuja phir sponge 🧽 bath de deta hun phir tu kapde badal lena per abhi toh fresh hona padega na .. chal chod deta hun tuja ..

Then he lifts her in his arms and went to washroom and made her stand on her feet ..

Shiva: jaa fresh hoja agar nahana hai toj naha bhi le .. main yahi khada hun jab ho jaye toh awaz de Dena okay ..

Raavi nodded and said okay with thumbs-up 👍.

After 30 minutes she knocked her door making shiva alert that she is done with everything.. she opened it and in a swift he lifts her up again ...

Made her comfortable in bed he made her drink soup and then medicine due to which she again felt sleepy due to medicine effect and she sleeps in again .. he tucked her properly making her lay down .

She gets a nightmare of what happened with her last night she wakes up with a jolt and cries in Shiva's arms ..

Shiva : shhh bas raavi main yahi hun haan .. .. shant hoja .. thodi der soja phir doctor ke pass chalenga okay ..

She hugged him and slept in his arms .. when he saw her in deep sleep he too closed his eyes feeling tired .. and when sleep took over him too he had no record of it .

TO BE CONTINUED...

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Hey guys..

How are you all ...

I have written something new .. I don't know how many people will like it .. it's not that I am criticizing any of the character.. It is just my thought that what If shiva didn't do that kesar kand but rishita did out of her ego ..

If you don't like it don't read it but no bashing at all .. stay away if you gonna say anything bad okay ..

This update is only for shivi fans and it's just my thought nothing in negative it's my perspective that agar esa show main hota toh kya hota bas baat wahi khatam hai ..

I still hope you like it ..

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Till then

signing off..

Lots of love

Yours ..

Dear diary

Zoey