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Topic sentence: Usually, people may admire a celebrity or a well-known businessman. However, I'd like to share about my father, Tai, whom I admire.

Supporting details:

1. Not a celebrity, nor perfect.

2. 47 years old, his hair has begun to thin to reveal a shiny forehead, gray hair has also starting to take the place of dark hair.

3. A flat belly become a fat beer belly, but handsome-old-man.

4. A bit difficult to please and full of disciplined, open-minded, and optimistic.

5. Anyway, trustworthy and mental support.

6. Work very busy and hard but always help with housework and spend time, the best things for wife and children.

Concluding sentence: My dad is the person I cherish most, and I love him enormously.

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Usually, people may admire a celebrity or a well-known businessman. However, I'd like to share about my father, Tai, whom I admire. My father is not a celebrity, nor is he perfect. Despite the fact that he is just 47 years old, his hair has begun to thin, revealing a glossy forehead, and gray hair has begun to replace black hair. My father used to have a flat stomach, but now he has a large beer belly, but in my opinion, he is always attractive regardless of his age... His demeanor is a little strange. He is a little tough to please, yet he's also very disciplined, open-minded, and optimistic. In any case, when horrible things happen, he may be relied on for mental support and trustworthiness. His work is demanding and hard, but he is always willing to assist with housekeeping and spend time with us, which is the best thing for mom and us. My dad is the person I cherish most, and I love him enormously.