💕Romance Results💕

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Hello everybody! Hopefully you are doing well!

I would like to express my humongous gratitude to the both spectacular judges DoveMalfoy19 and _shere03 for their great deal of dedication and hardwork! I strongly appreciate it. 

First and foremost, the romance's results are on their way as each participant and judge along myself are tremendously eager to acknowledge them. 

Without further an ado, the romance results are about to be distributed.


First position goes for 

Bombshells of Love by heslaphoria

Title: 3/5

 Cover: 4/5

 Blurb: 2/5 

Plot: 6/10 

Grammar: 9/10

 Writing style: 9/10 

Character development: 7/10 

Personal enjoyment: 12/15 

 Total: 62/70

 I really like the way you write it's just so perfect. Your grammar is on point and the descriptions oh! Loved them. I'd like to suggest if you could just alter the blurb it says otherwise to your story. Overall everything is fine and perfect.



Second position goes for

Sushi And Sea Lions by RCorsini

Title: 2/5 

Cover: 3/5 

Blurb: 3/5 

Character development: 8/10 

Plot development: 7/10 

Grammar/spelling/punctuation: 8/10 

Writing style: 6/10 

Enjoyment: 10/15 

 Total: 55/70 

Your plot is intriguing and looks unique. There are very few grammatical mistakes which can be overlooked but I suggest to correct them. Break your paragraphs, long paragraphs are too boring to read. As a reader, it becomes difficult to read. Overall I really liked the plot. Your wordplay is perfect.Also, if you are willing to change the title, then you should it doesn't look like fiction or to be specific a romance novel. Keep up with the good work :) 



Third Place goes for

Woman of Gold by libifumby34

 Author: 

Title (5): 4/5 

Cover (5): 4/5 

Blurb (5): 3.5/5

 Grammar/Punctuation (10): 7/10 

Character Development (10): 7.5/10 

Writing Style (10): 8.5/10 

Plot/Storyline (10): 8.5/10Overall Enjoyment: (15): 11/15Total (70): 54/70Review:I absolutely adore your descriptions and the way you manage to capture every moment perfectly. There are no restrictions when it comes to describing the emotions the character(s) must be feeling at that point, and I love that. I also love the strong vocabulary; that's a real effective plus point.I think the title is very powerful, and also very aptly suited to the main character, Aria. She's anything but common, just like gold. The best part about her though, is the fact that she's just as human as the rest of us, in the fact that she constantly battles with her mind and is stubborn and hardened for a well-justified reason.Throughout the story, I felt like the important areas of focus are the spellings and the sentence formation strategies. The chapters are well written but filled with typos, which I'm pretty sure you'll find once you start editing. Also, I would advise you to focus a bit on the blurb. The current description draws in some interest, but there's always scope for improvement.Other than that, I think the story is well-paced, I admire the concept and the storyline. I also love the pairing, because I feel like Otto and Aria have a lot of potential and they're going to discover it pretty soon.So, overall I'd say, great job! 



We haven't even concluded with the results yet! There are still worth prominent authors' names and their of kind works to be mentioned as well.


First honorable mention goes for

Capturing Memories by awakened_dreams

 Title: 3/5 

Cover:2/5

 Blurb: 4/5 

Character development:7/10 

Plot:8/10 

Grammar7:/10 

Writing style: 8/10 

Personal enjoyment:12/15 

Total: 51 out of 70

 Your blurb truly caught my attention. It certainly wanted me to go and just read what is inside. Most readers judge the book on the basis of the blurb because it gives a gist of what's going to be in the book. Your writing style is really good but can be improved. Otherwise, I really enjoyed reading your book. Keep up with the good work :) 



Second Honorable Mention goes for

Unexpectations by triothethird


Title (5): 3/5 

Cover (5): 3.5/5 

Blurb (5): 4/5 

Grammar/Punctuation (10): 5.5/10 

Character Development (10): 7/10

 Writing Style (10): 6.5/10 

Plot/Storyline (10): 7.5/10 

Overall Enjoyment: (15): 10/15 

Total (70): 47/70

Review:My favourite part is the fact that the story is inspired from The Hunger Games, and is NOT a cheap rip-off of the original series. It's got its own storyline going for it, and honestly, I love that. Full points for originality!I also took a liking to Taryn's character pretty early on in the story, probably because she's been hardened by the test of time and adversities. Losing people so close to you could never possibly be easy, and her decision to obtain a spot on the King's army proves that she's been through a lot, which has influenced her life decisions more than just a little.My suggestion would basically be to have the story feel a bit less complicated than it is now. Please keep in mind that I only say this because reading the paragraphs as they are now, may become confusing after a while, especially if the reader is a bit distracted. I'd ask you to let the story writing flow through you; don't try too hard to see the story progress. Let everything happen in its own time. Also, I think the book needs a bit of editing, specifically with the chronology of the chapters and the paragraphs arranged in a chapter.Other than this, I really like the story and would love to read more! Good luck (:


Tied with

Looking Beyond by LyraSerpens

Cover -4 /5 

Title -4 /5 

Blurb - 2/5 

Writing style and flow - 8/10 

Grammar/spelling/punctuations - 7/10 

Plot - 8/10 

Overall enjoyment - 14/15 

 Total - 47/70

I really like the way you write. Your wordplay is just perfect. I would just suggest making your blurb a bit short and sweet because honestly,y no one will read such a long blurb. Just make it to the point - what exactly are you showcasing in your book. I am looking forward to reading your book.



Congratulations once again to not only the winners in general, but also the runner-ups! Feel free to DM me, in order to obtain your sticker.

A brief message to these, who haven't won the contest: Just because you are mentioned, that shouldn't discourage you from writing and practicing your passion. Your work along writing style is one of a kind and resume writing and inspiring a galore of potential readers and authors!

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