neil was sitting in a relaxing chair facing his back...

neil khanna pov:-
           "hy guyss...i neil..neil
khanna...aap sab log kaise ho?
mein toh bhai bahut hi accha hun...srry mein aap logon se
peeche mudkar baat kar raha hun...age dekhka bhi kya fayeda???.....mein toh aap logon ko dekh hi nahin sakta hoon....kyun??...becoz i am blind..nahin nahin plzz aise
muh mat banaeye....mein bachpan se hi andha hoon...
meri zindagi mein andhere ke alawa aur kuch bhi nahi hai...
kabhi ujala meine dekha hi nahin..sirf mehsos kiya hai....
ab toh aise zindagi ki adat ho
chhuki hai...meri umar 24 years hai....mein kaisa dikhta hoon woh toh mujhe pata nahin lekin meri mom kehti hai ke mein bahut handsome hun...aap log toh mujhe dekh sakte hai na...toh bataeye kya mein handsome hun??...ok chhodiye uss baat ko....mere
dil bahut saaf hai...aur mein
ek aisa budha hun jisko jawani rehte huye bhi hamesha sahare ki zarrorat hai...lekin mein khud bhi independent banana chahata hun....kekin meri mom...maa to maa hoti hai na...kabhi mujhe akela nahi chhodti hai"

avni ayesha pov:-
           "hello people out there..
kaise hain mere 12343r ke readers....i know acche hi honge..mein bhi hoon....toh hamare beech thoda bahut introduction to banta hai..toh thoda apne beech intro intro
ho jaye...mein punjab di queen.....avni...avni ayesha..
mein toh ji hamesha chaanga hi rehti hoon...aur sabko chaanga rakhne ki kosish bhi
karti hoon...meri umar 24 saal hai ji...mein achi khasi beautiful hoon with a clean and clear heart....sacche pyaar ke talaash mein hun...apke nazar mein koi handsome sa
munda ho toh 12343r ko bata
dena....bada hi ehsaan rahega
aapka humpe...so bye..mein chalti hoon...phir mulaakat hogi next chapters mein..."

so how was it??
first chappy...
comments...
should i continue it or not??
love u all...