I've been working on an original story since 9th grade. I was just wondering if anyone would like to read it and offer criticism so I can improve myself.

It's the year 3000, the world is in ww4 and to top it off, mutant have been seen. To secure them, the us has made a base to hold them, seclude them, and to make sure they will never pose a threat.

The story follows Inmate 001, or Sage. He's a selective mute taken in from Austria. He's suddenly taken to a forest, where he finds a house with other like him. Tae-Hyun, a male from North Korea who needs a robotic mask to be able to speaks, and Mace. A 6' 8" giant who can't hurt a bug.