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Next morning when he woke up he saw the bed empty. He immediately stood up searching avni .Coming out from the room,he saw avni's parents and his brother standing and glaring at him.

Tumhein yaha kisne bulaya aur yaha kyu aye ho ... avni's dad asked

Ji yeh neil h shweta ji ka beta maine bataya tha apko neela said

Han to yeh yaha kyu aya hai ....

Papa wo avni ....

Avni uska khayal hm rakh skte hai aur kya kaha tumne papa main tumhara papa nhi hu zabardasti ke rishtey ni banate hm kisi se.

Papa yeh rishta zabardasti ka nhi h hmdono ki sehmati se h pyar krta hu main avni se aur avni mujhse aur main ab avni se aur dur nhi reh skta is baar pure haq se use apni wife banakar le jaunga.

Neil yeh kya keh rhe ho tm ,tm jante ho aisa ni ho skta ....neela spoke angrily

Kyu nhi ho skta maa main 8 saal tak chup rha bardasht kiya par sirf avni ni khatir lekin ab nhi main apse apki beti ka hath mangta hu main use hamesha khush rakhunga .

Khush rakhoge aur tum dekh liya neil tumne use kitna khush rakha aur kitni taklif de di .... riya spoke

Kya matlb hai tumhara riya aur 8 saal yeh kya natak laga rakha hai tumne meri beti yaha zindagi aur maut se lad rhi h aur tumhein shadi ki padi hui hai main apni beti ki zindagi aise hi kisi ko nhi de skta to behtar hoga tum chup chap yaha se nikal jao ....

Main to nhi ja rha apni avni ko chorkar ....

They were in their serious conversations when nurse called them as doctors want to meet them.

Neil hurriedly ran towards doctor's cabin while other followed him.

Doctor kya baat hai meri avni thik to hai na....

Aap kon patient ke family member.

Nhi doctor main hu patient ka family ye nhi (looking towards neil)

Doctor main avni ka hone wala husband hu to is hisab se mujhe janne ka haq hai aap batayiye.

Dekhiye internal bleeding hui hai aur hmne kuch test aur Scans kiye hai reports sham tak aa jayenge tab tak main kuch nhi keh paunga bs itna pray kijiye ki bleeding jyada badhe na .

Neil's face hung down listening to doctor.

At evening:

They all were in doctor's cabin , everyone face had mixed emotions .

After reading the reports

Hopefully there is a good news ki internal bleeding jyada ni hai aur dhere dhere recover hone ki chances hai. Sare tes..... before doctor could speak further nurse entered into cabin shouting .

Doctor immediately went towards room and other members followed .

Family members were stopped at the gate .

Inside room

Avni was breathing heavily her bp was fluctuating all of sudden the machines  stopped beeping making doctor and nurse hell worried for a moment they immediately gave injection and after few minutes of struggle avni's condition got stable and doctor left the room.

Doctor doctor avni wo...wo thik h na kya hua avni ko .....neil asked being worried.

Dekhiye I am sorry to say but patient has slept in coma . Unki body ne react krna band kr diya hai there are chances of blood clot in brain .

Neil stumbled a bit and he hold doctor's collar

" agar meri avni ko kuch hua na toh main chorunga nhi tumhein na teri ye degree rahegi aur nahi ye hospital "

Neil neil choro doctor ko ....riya said separating them .

Ye kya tarika hai baat krne ka .... neela slapped neil isilye main avni ko tumse dur rakhna chahti hu tunhari isi harkat ke wajah se .

Neil was beyond shock .

Maa main nhi hu aisa lekin agar meri avni ko kuch hua to main sach mein kisi ko ni chorunga mujhe meri avni jaan se jyada pyari hai aur uske age main kisi ki kuch ni sununga .

Neela was shocked seeing Neil's anger.

Ashish and neela were sitting outside avni's room .

Dekhiye aap log patience rakhiye maine aise cases bahut dekhe hai . Patient coma main hai to kya hua wo hamari baat sun skte hai baat kijiye unse unhe jagane ki kosish kijiye . Main aap logo ko false hope ni dena chahta par agar unhone response ni kiya toh condition can become more serious.

Neil stood up and held doctor's collar .

"Kya bola tumne meri avni ko Kuch ni hona chahiye nhi to na ye teri degree rahegi nahi ye hospital. "

"Neil choro unhe agar abhi avni yeh sab sun rhi hoti to use bilkul bhi acha nhi lgta choro neil jao avni ke pas " riya spoke separating both.

Ashish and Neela were shocked listening to doc and was angry on neil for his recent stunt .

Neil went to avni.....

Here, Riya explains everything that happened in past 8 years.
Both couldn't believe that their daughter was suffering these year. They immediately called Shweta & Prakash and called them in hospital.

Inside the room:

Avni wake up yr please  mujhe tumse baat krni hai .Na jane kitne dino se maine tumhari baatein ni suni h , tumhein pta h tum aise chup chap bilkul achi ni lagti . Yr tujhe pta h main ab pubg bhi ni khelta ab to baat krle na mujhse .

He moved more closer to her holding her hand more strongly "Wifey , uth jao na tumhein ghumne jana tha na mere saath to chlo na ab main bhi aa gya hu aur mujhe tumhein ab apne saath le jane se koi bhi nhi rokega . Haan avni maine sabko bta diya ki main tumse kitna pyaar krta hu aur main tumhein apni wife bna kar apne saath le jana chahta hu ,chalogi na .

"Avni ..... pls jaan utho na I miss you . "
He couldn't control himself and tears rolled down his cheeks.

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