Gingerkit and i were playing shadow clan and thunderclap. gingerkit was the thunderclap deputy and i was the shadow clan leader.

"you will never win only i shadow clan leader will defeat all the clans alone" i said as ginger and i both giggled. " i heard someone say shadow clan" a cat meowed. i looked to my left and saw snowkit emerging out of the nursery's den.

" i woke up. so can i play now?" snowkit meowed." sure." said gingerkit." snowsuit you will have to be a river clan  cat because sidestep is wind clan deputy. " awwww ok but I'm going to be the one to defeat you silverkit."

We played until our mothers called us to come to the nursery.

*****************the day when the three kits get their apprentice-ship**

" all clan cats old enough to catch their own prey gather here for a meeting. we are here to apprentice three kits. gingerkit step forward. from now on you will be known as gingerpaw." the clan leader looked down at nightfang.

"nightfang please pass down your courage and strength to this apprentice." my father said. "yes i will" said nightfang as he licked his new apprentices head. the whole clan shouted GINGERPAW!!! GINGERPAW!!! GINGERPAW!!! 

"snowkit from this day forward you will be known as snopaw. your mentor is berrytail. berrytail please pass your intelligence and strength to this apprentice." said the clan leader as he swayed his tail back and forth. berrytail nodded and licked his new apprentices forhead.

the whole clan shouted: SNOWPAW!!! SNOWPAW!!! SNOWPAW!!! it was my turn, my father called me to step forward."silverkit from this day froward you will be known as silverpaw. your mentor will be ashpelt. ashpelt will you pass your strength intelligence and wisdom to my son"

"yes i will silverstar." the whole clan shouted: SILVERPAW!!! SILVERPAW!!! SILVERPAW!!! now that i'm an apprentice i am very close to becoming a warrior.

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