For @OnlyOneChance101. Next oc will be Dustystripe.

Name: Aquafrost

Do the warriors even know what "aqua" means? I think this is a bit odd to use as a prefix. -frost is overused, but it's pretty cool, one of my favorites. It sounds good for this name.

Gender: She-cat

Sigh..

Appearance: Blind messy Russian blue

A bit overused. I'm not given an eye color... This appearance isn't very descriptive. Russian blue cats are used a bit too often in ocs.

Clan: RiverClan

Of course. It goes with her name, at least.

Rank: Medicine cat

Oh boy, a medicine cat. That reminds me: Littlecloud! My sweet tiny baby kitty, so pure, a precious cinnamon roll...

Personality: Kind, caring but doesn't show it very well, honest like every medicine cat should be, can be unkind in defense

Doesn't have many flaws. Not showing kindness well is good, not many ocs are like that. But she needs some major flaws, or she'll end up being Dovewing :/

Wait, I'm going to get the backstory.

Ok I'll wait.

Family: Riversong (See what I did there?) (Mother: Dead)

Pretty name, lol. I named a cat Riversong ...

Frostfoot (Father: Dead)

Is this where she got the -frost in her name, or is that just a coincidence?

Carpkit (Sister: Dead)

I love this name.

No mate or kits

Goood.

Backstory:
Aquakit at the time was born in leaf-bare, and she was born blind. Her mother was afraid that Aquakit would freeze to death, but Aquakit never really got cold. As time went by, Aquakit became an apprentice. When she heard that she had to become a medicine cat apprentice, she was very upset. Her mentor, Riverpool, noticed this and told Aquapaw a story about the Blind but Brave Jayfeather. This made Aquapaw feel better about being a medicine cat. Soon, her mother died of giving birth to Aquapaw's sister. Aquapaw blamed herself for her mothers death, and tried to take as much care of her sister as possible. Her father wasn't at the camp at the time, and everyone thought he was dead, but he came back to see his mate and kit to only find his wife dead, and his second kit about to die. Aquapaw sensed this and she tried to bring him back to the medicine cat den and heal him. But this was grief. Aquapaw went to sleep. And when she woke up, she found her father and sister dead, and she again blamed herself for this since she was asleep, and not trying to help them. After that she would never let anyone down, trying to help cats not die, even though it's what she's supposed to do

I see that you are a fan of Jayfeather, yes? You see quite a bit of blind ocs, but I like this!! She reminds me of Cinderpelt after Silverstream's death. (Spoilers? Oops) This is nice, I wouldn't really change anything.

·~*OVERALL*~·
She's alright, 6/10. Her appearance is a bit dull, and her name is kinda.. meh. Add some flaws and a better appearance, and she'll be better :3