For @Lilyfrost_Weirdo. Next oc will be Twistedfoot.

You shall love this one cuz you said it yourself :3

Yess I did :3 Everybody go read Lilyfrost's book Blood Washes Her Pelt. It's great. Even if she did kill my favorite character >:(

Name Barkfall :D

This name is a bit too close to Birchfall to be honest. They sound a lot alike. Bark- is very underused though, so I'll give you credit for that :3

Gender: Tom

;)

Appearance: Dark brown tabby tom with pale green eyes.

This appearance is.. eh. Dark brown tabby is overused. So are green eyes. It does fit his name, but it really isn't all thaf unique.

Clan: SunClan. I keep nearly sayi NH SubClan lol

Are you ok

SunClan is overused but that's k

Rank: Meddie Cat

Hello Barkface II

Personality: Calm, jumpy after battles, protective of his family.

No flaws here really. I like that he's jumpy after battles, most people don't do that :l but I think you should add something like: forgetful, clumsy, anxious, etc.

Backstory: Born normally... Watched his mother get kïlled in front of him by an enemy warrior, causing him to want to save his family and others. Became a warrior apprentice, and when the news was that the medicine cat Lovepool dïed, Barkpaw kinda took over. Decided to be a full meddie cat, and was trained by medicine cats from the other Clans. Became Barkfall, naming himself after a warrior name he wanted when he was a kit, and was a good medicine cat. Watched his leader, Redstar, turn evil, then get kïlled in the Dark Battle. Takes on an apprenticr, Echopaw, and that's where he is now.

This is cool. He's a warrior-turned-medicine cat which you don't see too often. I like that he reacted realistically when his mother was killed. I'd just like to know what happens after Echopaw.

No mate or kits, so I shall put family because... yeah I don't wanna be boring.

Okie :D good thing he isn't a cliche.

Mother, Curledtail, Father, Hawkflight, sister, Forestflame.

Curledtail! I remember her! She was my favorite bc I know a cat named Curly Tail ;-;

Other: Best friend us Stonepond, the MoonClan, I THINK, medicine cat. He trained beside Barkfall.

Stonepond is a really cool name.

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I give him 6/10. I think you should add flaws and a more unique appearance. I'd like to know what happens to him later in life.