For @TheSilverSunset. Next oc will be Silentjay.

Name: Darkstar (Formally Darkgaze)

Dark- is seen quite often, even for leaders. -gaze isn't used as often, but this suffix just seems... odd, to me. This name is cool though, and unique, I'll give you that.

Gender: Tom

Nice!

Rank: Leader

Another leader, that's 2 in a row :3

Clan: DeepClan, they live on the coast line near a very deep gorge. They also live near a reef.

Nice!! I haven't seen this before. I was worried that he would be in ShadowClan, he seems like a stereotype for that Clan. I like this much better.

Apearence: Very dark gray almost black tom with single white stripe running down his spine and two front white paws, he has very dark golden eyes.

This is awesome! Very unique, I love the stripe. Dark golden eyes aren't seen often, so great job with that. I wouldn't change any of this.

Personality: Darkstar can be secretive and unloving at times, but he always believed that everyone has good in them. Darkstar has a strong friendship feeling for Fawnpetal, his litter-mate, and his mate, Pebbleflight he loves very much. He has always wanted kits, but his mate is fixed. So they adopted several!

Nice! This isn't what I expected. Dark- automatically makes me think "bad guy." I'd add a few more flaws, just to balance out all of the good traits here.

Backstory: Darkstar was born to Reeflight and Rooktalon.He has three siblings (Shimmmerpelt, Sandystripe,Fawnpetal) but only ever felt connection with Fawnpetal. So as he grew up, his father was killed by a Poison snake they called "The Dark Striker. " Darkpaw ventured out with Puddlepelt, Rooktalon former apprentice, Cederpaw, his other son, and Fishscale, his father's brother. They were almost killed, and Cederpaw was renamed Venomtalon because he was bit sevral times and came to no harm. Darkpaw was made a warrior, and went out to Two leg place. He met Pebble, and tool her back to his clan. They fell in love moons later, and adopted his sister, Shimmmerpelts kits after she died. They raised them. After they were made warriors, a Rouge left two kits on their territory. Darkgaze raised them, and was given an apprentice, Splashpaw. Venomtalon and Storkwing became mates, and Venomtalon was killed. Storkwing gave birth, and was killed two moons later. Darkstar and Pebbleflight again raised their kits. They then saved a drowning kit, and raised them also. This was added later: Shimmerpelt died giving birth, a rogue left the kits because she didn't want them. Venomtalon went into battle a few days before Storkwing's kits were due, and was killed. Storkwing went on patrol and shoved an apprentice named Dapplepaw out of the way of a monster. He was made deputy after he adopted the rogue kits and was leader only 2 moons later because Swirlstar died of Blackcough.

This is very long, but I like it. Thanks for providing all of the details for me. This backstory isn't THE most unique, but it's very cool. I like the part about his mate being unable to have kits, and adopting them. That was a nice thing to add.

Mate: Pebbleflight

Adorable name.

Kits: Shimmerpelt) Goldencloud, Deerwhisker, Cederstep, and Hailsong
Rouge) Stormfire and Whiteflower
Venomtalon) Rookwing, Lilysplash, and Seedflight
Drowning) Drown/ Waterlily

Holy crap, that's a lot of kits. Adorable names, good job.

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This is a good oc, 9/10. Just add some more flaws to his personality, and he'll be good!