For @Jay-and-Ember. I just did Jay, and now this is Ember. I like your username.

Name: Emberlight

A cute name. Both the prefix Ember- and the suffix -light are pretty neglected, so points for you!

Gender: she-cat

Of course...

Rank: warrior

Alright

Clan: RiverClan

At least it's not Thunder! I like RiverClan.

Personality: Snappy, rude, independent, sarcastic, arrogant

I like this personality. A typical oc is always kind and shy and all of that-- this one is diverse! Yay!

Backstory: Went from SkyClan with her sister when they were young. Fell in love with a tom she didn't know was evil, and when she was warned by her sister, they drifted further apart. Then he attacked the camp, killing many cats and asking her to join him. Then they eventually fight him off and she becomes mates with some other tom who had a crush on her.

I like the longer backstory. I'm still not given a reason for her leaving SkyClan, but I'll let that be. I'm kinda thinking of Snowfur reading this? Not exactly sure why. I'm glad that she isn't a perfect cat, she's made some mistakes.

The end kinda makes me laugh. She just became mates with a random tom? XD

Mate/kits: New: Blackberry. Old: Stormheart.

I like the name Blackberry. It's very cute. Stormheart is a bit overused, but eh.

Looks: Dark red with ice blue eyes and a fluffy tail

By dark red, I assume you mean dark ginger, or reddish brown? But idk, when I read that I got an image of like a blood red colored cat. The ice blue eyes is another overused eye color.

·~*OVERALL*~·

She's pretty much great. Probably 8.5/10. I like her backstory and personality. The only thing I might change is her appearance; "dark red" isn't a way that I'd imagine a cat. But I like her!! Great cat :3