For @Golden-Sunset. The next oc will be Scorchleaf.

Name: Fishpool

I like this. I've noticed that Fish- is very underused because people normally don't like to name their characters after prey. -pool is quite overused, but it fits with the prefix, and I like it. It's a cute, simple name.

Gender: Tom

U_U

Appearance: Long-furred cream tom with green eyes.

This is nice! You don't see many cream colored ocs. The only ones in the books are Daisy and her descendants; kittypets. I imagine that he is of kittypet descent, or possible Daisy's descent.

Clan: (my clan) Duskclan

A pretty overused name, but I see no problem with it.

Rank: Medicine Cat

WOO! Haven't talked about a medicine cat in a while. You know who else I haven't talked about? Littlecloud. That little guy is a blessing to the warrior cats. I love him. I LOVE HIM.

Personality: Quiet, grouchy, a jerk, patient, and snotty.

Haha, I like this! He isn't flawless, which is great. -Pool normally means a very calm cat, but that's okay. He reminds me of Jayfeather. I like Jayfeather, but I prefer Littlecloud <3

Backstory: After being attacked by his mother and witnessing her death, he became more quiet. Although, overall, his apprentice life was normal, as a full medicine cat, he met a she-cat named Forestfall from Mountainclan. She thought they would be mates, until one moon, when an unfortunate event, (two cats from Lakeclan and Groundclan becoming mates and both being driven from the clans) he realized that what he was doing was wrong, and stopped meeting with her. She became furious, and now scowls at him at every gathering, clawing him whenever possible. He and his sister are now medicine cats together, Bumbleheart (med cat then) got a sign from Starclan that it was both their destinies to become the next medicine cats.

This is cool! I'd like to know why tf his mother attacked him, but other than that, this is nice. The forbidden love thing kinda bothers me, but at least he changed his mind.

Mate/Kits: None

Good.

·~*OVERALL*~·
8.5/10. He's pretty simple, which is nice, but nothing about him really stands out to me. A few things in his backstory confused me, but other than that, he's great!