For @Foxthecat. Next oc will be Dreamrunner.

Name: Foxtail

This name is cute. It isn't the most unique, Fox- and -tail are both very overused. This is simple tho, and I tend to like ocs that are just simple..

Random note, foxtail grass will kill ur dog so don't let em touch it, k.

Gender: she-cat (sorry!

It's cool.

Appearance: Calico with bright green eyes

Calicos aren't used very often, so I like that. Bright green eyes are overused tho, so... sorry.

Clan: CloudClan

The double Cl makes me giggle.

Personality: Jealous at some points, caring, loving, a good sister, but can also be rude when she has too.

Nice. She has flaws, good. She's cool, a bit of an overused personality but I like it.

Backstory: She was born a loner, but joined the clans with her sister Bird after her mother and father died. They lived in Cloudclan, and there was much controversy between her and bird over a tom, Roboleg (okay don't judge the name). She soon found another tom, Graywhisker, had kits, and died at the claws of Shadowstar.

Roboleg. Sorry but... Roboleg.... rlly.

This backstory has some confusing things... 1. How did her parents die, 2. Roboleg... wtf... and 3. Why did Shadowstar kill her, what a butthole.

Rank: Warrior

Ok

Mate: Graywhisker

Cute!! I like this name a lot.

Kits: Ravenkit, Stormkit, and Mintkit

Raven and Storm are overused, but I love Mint.

·~*OVERALL*~·
8/10. She's alright. The name is overused, and the appearance isn't very unique, but her nice personality and kinda nice backstory make up for it.

Also Roboleg.... why?