Juniperpaw

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For @Warrior_at_Heart. Next oc will be Fishpool.

Name • Juniperpaw

I like this! Juniper is a very cute prefix, and it isn't used too often. She doesn't have a warrior name, so I can't judge that.

Gender • She-cat

Of course..

Appearance • Gray she-cat with white markings and green eyes

Simple. This is cute, gray is my favorite color for warriors because most of the feral cats by my house are gray. The white markings are a nice touch. Green eyes are a bit overused, but I like them.

Clan • The one, the only SKYCLAN made by the worst leader in history, Clear Sky

I haven't read any books with Clear Sky, but from what I've heard, he's a massive jerk. Is Clear Sky even a he? Or a she? Jfc, I don't even know.

As for SkyClan, that's cool :3

Rank • Aprentice what else would she be, a leader?!

She's Juniperpawstar u_u

Personality • Rude, mean especially towards Hollypaw, not all about kindness or sarcasm, loyal TO HER CLAN, basically follows orders

This is great! Finally, a cat that doesn't have a perfect personality! I'd like to know what Hollypaw did, lol. I like Juniperpaw a lot. Makes me laugh a little XD

Backstory • Her mother was killed in battle (Come on, ThunderClan! Why ya gotta be so rude? Don't cha know I'm human too?). She has begun to have a liking for Wolfpaw tho. Other than that, she has had normality in life bruh.

Her mother was a human? Odd..

Jk. Anyway, you didn't tell me much about her here, I think that's because she's only an apprentice. I'd like to know why SkyClan and ThunderClan were battling, that seems odd. This is set far in the future, yes? Anywho, I'd like to hear more about her as a warrior.

Mate • None. But crush..... That's a whole different story.

Haha, cute. It fits her being an apprentice well.

·~*OVERALL*~·
9/10! She's awesome, but I have an easier time judging warriors. Her backstory isn't very long, so I can't judge it very well. I'd like to hear about her as a warrior.

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