For @Stardustdragon345. Sorry to make you wait so long!

Name: Leafwish

This name is alright. I'm not fond of -wish as a suffix, because it seems too human-y. But in this case, with the common prefix Leaf-, it really helps to make the name cool and unique.

It also reminds me of the book "Leafpool's Wish," lol.

Gender: She-cat

Of course... but Leafwish is DEFINITELY a she-cat name.

Age: 24 moons

Two years. Pretty young!!

Looks: Small calico she cat with blue-green eyes and a very fluffy orange tail. She has grey fur as a base color and then brown black dark grey and orange for her calico colors.

Seems very beautiful! You don't see many calico ocs. The bushy orange tail reminds me of Redtail.. *sobbing*

Blue-green eyes are quite overused, but they're still very pretty.

Clan: Thunderclan

Typical.

Personality: She is determined, quiet, outspoken, brave at times, sweet, caring, loyal to the bone, will do anything for her friends, a short temper and small but mighty.

Seems to be a bit too flawless. She does have a few flaws, yes, but no major flaws. If your cat does not have major flaws, they become Firestar.

NOBODY wants to be Firestar.

Maybe she could be forgetful, which would be a major flaw for a medicine cat. Or bossy, selfish, overly confident, etc. They make her seem like a crappy person, but everyone is a bit crappy.

.-.

Rank: medicine cat.

Like Leafpool. Leafwish... leafpool... Do you like Leafpool? I get the feeling that you are a fan of Leafpool. I like it when peoples' favorites from the books are a bit like their ocs.

Too many people hate Leafpool :S

Backstory: When her and her brother, Flameheart, were very young, their mother was taking them to their father and they both were rouges. But she was accidentally killed by a Thunderclan warrior. Tigerstar, who was leader, no not the tiger star from the books, took them in as her own kit. She raised them and they had no clue that they weren't clan born, until they met their father. Leafwish decided to become a medicine cat and was out collecting herbs when a rouge attacked her, this rouge turned out to be her father, Rust. He recognized her after a minute because he had seen them while they were kits. Though then Leafwish had a vision, 'When thunder crashes and the rust of cats dies, leaf and flame will rise to defeat the oncoming storm.' So a few months later when Leafwish met her father's new mate, Flatface, near a cliff thunder struck the cliff causing Rust to die. To shorten things up they did save the clan but Leafwish ended up blind.

Well, this is a bit confusing. Tigerstar's name, for one, confused me! But oh well. Also, I read Flatface's name as Fartface O.o

This backstory is pretty cool, but honestly, I think it could use some work. I'd just like it if you described it more to me. You told me this prophecy, and then you didn't really explain how it was fulfilled..

How did the ThunderClan warrior kill her mother? Why did the leader decide to take them in?? But other than those things, this is actually quite interesting.

Non-Clan cats that join the Clan are very common in ocs, apparently.

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7/10! She's pretty great. I'd definitely add a major flaw, maybe change her eye color, and add a bit more info to her backstory. Other than those little things, she's great! Keep up the awesome work :3