For @Spazz-Lord. next oc will be Hawktail. I accidentally copy and pasted Hawktail into this book first, and while I'll publish Peppernose first, it might be out of order just FYI.

Name --- Peppernose

This is cute, but I'm curious, do the Warriors even know what pepper means? I'm going to assume that they do. I've never seen this is not prefix before, and -nose is one of my favorite names. I like this, it's quite original.

Gender --- Tom

Oak!

Looks --- Frail black tom with one light grey mark on his flank, and one silver mark towards the base of his right ear. He has sharp yellow eyes, and his fur is thick and usually messy.

This is very descriptive, I like it. Yellow eyes with dark fur is one of my favorite appearances. I like the thick, messy fur. It's easy to imagine exactly what he looks like, but at the same time, his appearance isn't bland.

Clan --- DewClan (Personal Clan from a future book of mine)

Hmm, cute

Rank --- Medicine Cat :3

He seems like a medicine cat, I like that. It fits his name and appearance.

Personality --- Peppernose is known to be a very stressed and fretful cat, he's clumsy and a tad easily scared. He's outgoing around close friends and rather sympathetic, making him a wonderful medicine cat. He is intelligent, but he's a tad too cocky about that aspect at times.

Awww I like him!! He seems a lot like my old cat. Like, they look similar, and the personality fits. He seems a bit stereotypical for a medicine cat, tho. Fearful and stressed are just overused in medicine cats. I like everything else, but this is getting kind of old.

Backstory ---  Peppernose was the only kit of his Mother - Ferndapple of Thunderclan's - litter. His father, unlike his mother, was a valued member of Dewclan - his name was Sageclaw. At 6 moons of age, Ferndapple returned to her clan. This left Peppernose to the paws of his rough and tumble father whom he had close to no relationship with. He is apprenticed to Crippleleg as a medicine cat, and finds he'd rather spend his life healing than battling - most considered him foolish for this reason as an apprentice. After receiving the medicine cat name Peppernose and taking on full warrior duties, his father dies to the claws of a mother badger whom was protecting her 2 cubs. Roughly 5 moons after, his mentor dies of poisoning, leaving Peppernose as a nervous Medicine cat. Peppernose dies of Old age while residing in the Elders Den. 🐈

Ah, a very simple yet not simple backstory. It's not too tragic, but at the same time he does face struggles. Realistic, I like it. Most people don't make their ocs die an elder for some reason, so I like this even more. Why was Ferndapple in DewClan in the first place tho? Like why did she have a mate outside of ThunderClan.

Mate --- N/A
Kits --- N/A

Good.

.-*OVERALL*-.

8/10. I'm not really sure about whether Pepper is a valid prefix or not. His personality is good, but not the best. I was a bit confused by his backstory, but otherwise, I like him.