For @treeclan. Next oc will be Blackstorm.

Name: Whisper That Chills The Bone (Whisper)

Another Tribe cat! Nice! I'm not sure if I really like this name. It doesn't seem very cat-like. Tribe cat names, in my opinion, should stay more nature-y. The name is very creative though, so good job on that!

Gender: She-Cat

Ok

Appearance: A very light grey she-cat with a dark grey belly and black tips of the ears. Her eyes are a mixture of shades of brown

Ooooh! Gray is a very common color, but the different shades as well as the black make this more unique. I love the eyes. This is good, not the best, but good.

Clan: Tribe of Looming Trees

I like this ok

Rank: Prey-Hunter

Hmmmm okay

Personality: Doesn't chat much to most cats, but talks a bit to some close friends. She tends to creep some cats out with her intimidating stare, her silence and strange words. Whisper's feelings can get hurt very easily, and she is also a little cold-hearted. However, if she does be rude or mean she probably doesn't mean it.

Love this too!! Very descriptive, gets the point across. I like you described her as kinda creepy, most people don't do that. I also like that she's sensitive. Good job !!!

Backstory: Whisper grew up as a loner. As a kit, she used to live in a small patch of territory in a thick woodland. When she was only 6 moons, there was a huge forest fire. Whisper and her sister Poppy were trapped in a tree as the fire raged around them. Whisper tried her hardest to support her younger sister, but her words only made the situation worse.. The branch her sister was on wasn't strong enough to support her, so her sister fell into the fire. Whisper was horrified, she thought it was all her fault that her words had made Poppy shift and move so the branch had fell. Whisper then spotted her parents, Birdy and Jack. She helplessly tried to reassure herself and them, but before long she was watching her parents be burnt to death. Whisper miraculously managed to escape the forest fire. After travelling for a full day with next to no food, she stumbled into The Tribe Of Looming Trees camp. There she was cared for, but she didn't speak for two sunrises. When she did, her words were eerie, giving her her name.

Ohh, I like her backstory. The way she got her name is cool, but I think that's a pretty cruel thing to name someone. This is good.. but I want to know more. What was her life like in the Tribe?

Mother: Birdy (Deceased)

Cuute

Father: Jack (Deceased)

Ok

Mate: None

:(

Siblings: Poppy (Deceased)

Cute name, Poppy is a favorite of mine.

Kits: None

Okay.

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She's pretty good, 9/10. Her name kinda bugs me. I love love love her personality, and her appearance isn't half bad. The backstory could use a bit of work, but nothing major..