Spiritclaw is an interesting name. I feel like Spirit works better as a suffix, and -claw is a bit overused. There's quite a few mixed nicknames there, too. 😬
I like the addition of a rogue he dated, and him questioning why he liked both toms and she-cats. But with the symbol, what do you mean 'he was born with it'?

I love the AshClan symbol! It's an unusual Clan name, too, and by age I'd guess he's been a pretty experienced warrior. I like how you were so thorough to think of who gave him the suffix and how much he likes it.

A bit generic to have him from ThunderClan, but I like your idea of him leaving and starting his own Clan - why did he call it AshClan? I also like how the kittypets have him his own collar as a think you for saving them and joined his Clan :) but I feel like having the dog teeth in it is a bit Scourge-y and could imply bad intentions.

I feel like your negative traits really contradict the positive ones - you can't really be thoughtless, cold, mean and a killer while being cheerful, polite, happy and generous.

I love the art you made of him - he has a really creative design.

Thats quite a unique story! In AshClan, was the code changed so medicine cats can take mates so Irispool and Spiritclaw could be together?

I like the inclusion of Nightmare being a former rogue who joined ThunderClan, and both her and Sharptooth's designs are really nice - as are his littermate's colours. The only thing is with Nightmare's design her fur can't be short and shaggy - shaggy is a sort of 'texture' of long fur. And why did Jaywing plan to get rid of his kits - what was going on with the mother?

Irispool's design is really quite cute, and I like their future kits' names. I like Stormstripe's fur - all the different colours and patterns certainly suggest a storm, lol.

Thats a lot of skill ratings! You've been very detailed with creating Spiritclaw, and I like all the different skills you came up with and his level of skill.

Even more skills!

Some very interesting likes, dislikes, strengths and weaknesses. Why doesn't he like sassy she-cats? Those are some deep quotes too.

I do like morally grey characters - neither evil or good. And I see where the mark came from - though I think it's a bit unrealistic to have such a detailed mark imprinted on his shoulder because of lightning. It's sad everyone hates him and believes he's cursed, though.

Woah, Spiritclaw has had some serious bad luck in his life.

That'd a great ending! I like how he doesn't even realise he's doing good and creating a Clan of his own.
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Overall, Spiritclaw was a really interesting and creative character to view. He had some serious bad luck in his life, and was constantly blamed for so much death, but pulled through, saved the lives of his nieces and nephews and started his own wholesome Clan!

Thanks for sending my your OC, hercega, and I'm sorry it took so long to get out!

- Grey

P.S: I wasn't sure if you wanted a Picrew so I made one anyway, I hope that's okay! (It's not a perfect match, but I tried.)