This one was about Fogkit, a sickly kitten who struggled with the fact that they weren't able to do the normal things other kits could. It was a tragedy, since Fogkit was planned to die at the end. I even planned for his final line to be something like, "I finally feel healthy."

The clan was a solitary clan called BogClan, who lived in a marsh. This clan is even more ableist then the book clans, which they justify due to their harsh environment. Large predators and a constantly flodded environment.

The prologue was jusr Fogkit and his siblings birth, but it was only 300 words so it was only, like, three paragraphs. It didn't add anything, is what I'm saying.

Chapter one has Fogkit watching his siblings play, feeling frustated he couldn't play with them. An apprentice, named Mallowpaw, decides to train Fogkit a fighting move to cheer him up. Until Fogkit's overprotective mother puts a stop to it.

The second chapter has Fogkit awake in the medicine den, coughing. The medicine cat and her apprentice give him some herbs and water. There's a timeskip where Fogkit wakes in the middle of the night. Fogkit expresses his frustration over always being sick again, and then spots the medicine cat apprentice sneaking out. Another time skips to morning. Turns out the medicine cat apprentice and another apprentice are a couple, though Fogkit is oblivious to the signs. The other apprentice, Minkpaw, is very nice and motherly twoard Fogkit. Then Fogkit pretneds to be at a gathering with his siblings and the other kits. He is bullied by Coyotekit.

A longer chapter as you can tell.

Important characters time. Ploverkit and Stormkit are Fogkit's siblings. Ploverkit is shy and a coward, while Stormkit is defensive, especially of Fogkit. Whisperheart is their mother, and she's overprotective of Fogkit. Circinaekit is Fogkit's friend, while her brother Coyotekit is his bully. Mallowpaw and Minkpaw are like older siblings to Fogkit. And that's all.

I think it'd work as a tragedy, and has an interesting POV. The main problems is kits don't do a lot, and I didn't have it planned out like most others.