CrimsonFea

Name: Cinderface
Very interesting name, I kinda like it.

Past names: Cinderkit, Cinderpaw

Future Names: n/a

Name Reason: Well he is grey so that's where Cinder comes from and as for Face it is a suffix often used for notable features, and Cinderface is rather feminine. Oooooo

Looks: a slender coal gray tom, he is long legged and serpent tailed, short glossy fur that he often finds himself grooming constantly, and eyes that are molten and amber, rounded by darker hints of russet. 👌

Gender: tom

Personality: Cinderface is a slut, HA he doesn't care for other cats and is horribly vain, an arrogant beast that cats often call selfish, but he's really trying to hide all his pain, for really he's a sweet soul, with a gentle voice, and listening ear. The negatives and positives well done.

Rank: newbie, has only been a warrior for a bout a season.

Past Ranks: kit, apprentice

Age: two years

Age at Death. N/A he's not dead yet. Huzzah

Family:

Greybreast:mothers dead
Greybreast? Uuuum, I don't think that's suitable name.

Father:Viperheart- dead

Brother: Adderbloom-alive

Mate: Doeshine (formerly) Petal(currently)
I love the creativity in all the names and would love to know the reasoning behind them all
Kits:
warning are adopted Cinderface is infertile.

Cherrykit/flight

Viperkit/fall

So this buds are just adopted? That's very fair. I like that.

So i would have loved to have been given a backstory, so I can really do a fair analysis on Cinderface here. I would have loved a little bit of appearance for his fam. So I would say 6/10. If I had more detail with the backstory I could score better.