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Name- Coralflame
Unless Corlaflame lives near the ocean or lived with Twolegs it had fam etc. I don't see how the prefix would have been know

Past names- lucy, coralkit, coralpaw oh Lucy. So Coral wasn't her original name, I see.

Prefix- coral- for her sandy and white pelt still how do they know of coral

Suffix- her fiery personality  nothing wrong with that.

Description- a short spikey furred white she-cat with pale ginger and ginger sharp flecks. her left ear is torn off and she has a nick in her right ear and blue eyes. Does it explain how she gets the torn a nick?

Gender- she-cat but uses he/him pronouns oh cool, excuse the word she being used early than.

Rank-  warrior

Past ranks- boat-cat, kit,apprentice when you say boat cat you mean like he lived on a boat? So that explain how he knows about coral?? Brilliant

Age- 25 moons

Age at death- n/a that's fine

Clan- SeaClan ; a clan that lives on the beach bootiful, this answers my questions and concerns.

Personality- negative, rude, snarky, smart, cheeky, resourceful, bubbly and cunning probably could go into more detail. Or give explains of how he does that etc.

Likes- the ocean, being on boats, fish, swanshadow, and coral 

Dislikes- kits, hot sand, mean fishermen, most cats hot sand I can agree with

Kin- jake ( father ) sushi ( mother ) swanshadow ( mate ) parent description would have been nice

Mate- swanshadow- a black she-cat with a white chest and grey eyes

Kits- none

Mentor- orchidsong- a black and white tuxedo she-cat with olive green eyes I quite like that name.

Apprentice- blackpaw( briar )- a black and brown tom with green eyes

Backstory- when coralfire Coralflame? was a young cat, she lived on a boat with an old fisherman answer question answered. she met a few clan cats one day on the docks and decided to join the clan. during her early kit days, rootkit was swept downstream and was rescued by seaclan. she was renamed to swankit and the two began their apprenticeship together lately. soon, coralflame became a warrior but swanpaw decided she didn't want to become a warrior so she began to train as a medicine cat. swan soon realized the cruel and violent truth about how the clans operated and began to kill off the cats that were corrupting their clan. the rest is TBA!
I got slightly confused reading tue backstory but got there in the end.

I would have loved to have heard more about Seaclan. Go into more description and I think you'll have a really good oc. Same with the backstory.

I rate Coralflame a 6/10. There's a few ting things that need to be managed but other than that I see nothing wrong with him.

I hope I got the pronoun right but calling him him? Sorry if I didn't, I do my best.

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