BearForever27

Name: Featherflight
Love the name
Looks: a grey tabby she-cat with blue eyes, she as a silky, silver pelt and a flowing tail
I like this cats design
Gender: she-cat
Okay
Rank: warrior/queen
Sweet
Age: 25 moons
Young is good
Clan: Riverclan
It's nice to see something different
Personality: Featherfight is a sweet, bold, sassy, determined, easily agreed, loyal she-cat
How can same one be sweet and easily angered but I guess it works
Kin:
Mother: Mistystar — cat from the series
Interesting
Father: Unknown
Aww
Crowkit— black Tom with bright green eyes
Prondkit— silver dapple she-kit with blue eyes
Pretty
Mate: Reedwish a black Tom with white paws and green eyes
Mentor: Heronblaze a light brown she-cat with brown eyes, and a short temper
I like how you added short temper, it helps picture Heronblaze
Apprentice Flowpaw a white and black she-cat with brown paws deceased
Oh what happened
Backstory:
Featherflight was an only kit in the litter.
Same with one of my OC'S
Growing up on Riverclan was hard for Featherflight. Non of the cats paid any mind.
Two things one what do you mean by mine and second that just rude and mean
She longed to be a normal like Troutkit and Oakkit
Why isn't she normal
But nothing ever happened. As an apprentice Featherflight had Heron treat her like trash.
Mentor are supposed to help you not dray you down
Featherflight earns her warrior name, and she couldn't have done it without Feathertail. The starry she-cat had guided Featherflight through all the misery and told her that one day it would be better.
She has a hard life. I'm surprised that Featherflight didn't join the dark forest

That was really good just a few flaws, you could give Feathertail a bit more of a back story and maybe give her kit (there are her kit) more of an part, But other then that I think it's really good. I would rate it 9/10. Hope I helped, glad to be of help.