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As you have Shade's current name as Shadepaw that's what I've put as the title.
Name: Shadepaw
Past name : Shadekit
Future name: Shadesight not a bad name.
Why the prefix: because she has a dark grey coat kinda boring.
Why the suffix: she has a black mask around her eyes why not have her name to do with her personality or something other than her appearance?

Description:Shadesight has a Smokey grey coat. She has a black mask around her eyes and light grey paws. She has dark blue eyes maybe add her gender specifically. You also say her name as Shadesight was I wrong earlier?

Clan: RiverClan canon or slightly different or...?
Gender: She-cat
Rank: Queen is this a permanent queen??
Past rank (s): kit, apprentice, warrior. I think so eeee
Age: 46 moons senior warrior then?
Past clan: Has always been in RiverClan
Family: Limpfoot (mate) Timberpaw (son) Featherstar (daughter) Minksprint (sister) Lilypetal (daughter) finally some creative names. And oof Limpfoot, I love the name but oof. And her daughter became the leader that's exciting. Also would they know what a mink is?

Mentor: Brightcloud (the RiverClan deputy) was she the deputy while she was being trained? I wouldn't think so right as her daughter is leader which means- i think you know where I'm going.
Apprentices: Fernpaw (Fernpelt) Snakepaw (Snakefang)

Backstory:
Shadekit was born with her sister, Minkkit, to Poppyfur. Shadekit was more of the quiet, non-social one. Shadepaw was apprenticed to Brightcloud, the RiverClan deputy. Wait how does that work. Unless- no that still doesn't work. If her daughter become leader that means she'd have to be deputy than leader which means Shade's mentor would be either retired or dead?? Correct me if I'm wrong. Two moons after she became an apprentice, Poppyfur died in a battle. That's when she met Limppaw, from ThunderClan. Limppaw has a broken leg, and he never walked like a real cat. Obviously. Shadepaw liked Limppaw a lot. After she became a warrior, known as Shadesight, she kept vistiting Limpfoot at four trees. After four moons of seeing the ThunderClan warrior, she realized she was having kits. Her kits were born in RiverClan and they are great warriors. She has both of his litters??? Intriguing.

Cause of death: Died in a battle with ShadowClan oof. What type of battle?

Forgot to add some stuff)
That's all goods.

Personality: loyal, great hunter, can be a bit rude though, snappy. Could probably add more and go into more detail.

Likes: Battles, Limpfoot, obviously. hunting
Dislikes: .. erm.. Nothing?
You can't tell me you don't like everything in this world so the chances are the same for Shadeslight here, tot just need to built on her character a bit more or figure that out. Add more detail to both likes and dislikes.

Shadeslight isn't the best cat I've seen but definitely isn't the worse. There's so much to work on.

I rate shade a 7/10. You can work on a more detailed character base and her backstory.

Thank you so much for submitting your oc. Sorry it took so long.

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