Name: Ravenblaze (Raven- because of her appearance and -blaze because of her burning ambitions)

Nice name and reasons!

Appearance: a black she-cat with white chest, belly, ear tufts, tail tip and paws and burning amber eyes

I like it!

Likes: helping her clan, pushing herself to her limits

Interesting!

Dislikes: when's he fails herself and/or her clan

Okay!

Personality: Ravenblaze is somewhat mute, but is friendly to a cat that she has warmed up to. She is always determined in whatever she is doing and always tries to never let her clan down. She is very disappointed when she fails herself as well as her clan. She is very loyal.

Good!

Family:

Mate: Poppytail: a gray she-cat with black ankles and paws and tail tip and green eyes

Father: Nightgaze: a coal-black tom with blue eyes (dead)

Mother: Clouddapple: a beautiful, slender white she-cat wit darker dapples and yellow eyes (alive)

Brother: Riverkit: a tiny light-brown tabby tom with river-blue eyes (alive)

Sisters: Featherpaw: gray tabby she-cat with yellow eyes (dead), Mosswing: black-and-white dappled she-cat with white chest and tail tip, green eyes

I really like these names and descriptions!

Rank: warrior (later deputy then leader)

Okay,though lots of people have their OCs be the Clan deputy and leader.

Clan: SnowClan

A little overused,but good!

Backstory: Ravenblaze(kit) was born in the same litter as her sisters Mosswing(kit) and Featherpaw(kit). Ravenkit got along well with Mosskit, while Featherkit was more of an introvert. She also got along well with Poppytail(kit), the kit of Waterfur, another nursery queen. Soon, the four were all made apprentices-Ravenpaw, Mosspaw, Featherpaw and Poppypaw. Featherpaw sadly drowned during a hunting patrol shortly after being made an apprentice. Ravenpaw wished she had a better relationship with her dead sister. The moons went by, Mosspaw and Ravenpaw still stayed good friends, and Ravenpaw and Poppypaw got even closer. Soon, they were made warriors-Mosswing, Ravenblaze, and Poppytail. Ravenblaze's father, Nightgaze, noticed that his daughter and Poppytail were becoming extremely good friends-too good friends. 

 Nightgaze then realized his daughter was bisexual and had feelings for Poppytail-who had feelings for her as well. Nightgaze then scolded his daughter for not liking a tom in the clan while Clouddapple approved of her daughter's sexuality. Nightgaze, from that day, neglected his daughter, who never stopped loving him despite his hatred. Nightgaze soon died, and even though Ravenblaze's grieved, she saw her chance to confess her feelings to Poppytail-who was soon her mate. After Nightgaze's death, Ravenblaze thought she had failed him and wanted to do something to make it up to him and the rest of her clan-though she didn't do anything to the clan itself-and devoted herself to train to become deputy. Clouddapple then had her final kit-Riverkit; she was pregnant before Nightgaze died. Riverkit looked up to Ravenblaze like she was clan leader-this made Ravenblaze even more determined to become leader. From that day forth, she had wanted to lead her clan with her burning ambition and determination.

I really like it!

Other: Ravenblaze is of course bisexual

Yep,I rarely see cats who aren't straight in the Warriors world!

 I give it *drumroll*....an A+! I really like this OC and it's really unique! If you use this OC in any story,please tell me so I can read it!

 ~Lilac