This is mainly so i can see if this is alright for the contest i entered. Is this pose alright JapansWife 

I am finally at my computer! I am back from vacation and i can now play my games and draw!!! This is just a rough sketch that isnt even done, so its bad but I plan on finishing it tomorrow. How does Radiant's hair look? I tried for a more detailed look but idk if i like it.