BerryTruffles Here she, I tried to make her look like a rainbow threw up.

If I would have made her way less Mary sue and less colorful I would have probably liked her design more.

My cons to this:
1. The highlights looks kind of bad
2. I don't like the outfit, at all. Just a taste thing, not draw thing
3. The colors are painful

Mt pros to this:
1. The anamoty is decent
2. I actually tried make-up and it doesn't look bad
3. The eye and bangs are alright