OK time to stop being lazy im going to finally rate the only OC that was entered
This OC was made by
AU: No
Time period: unknown by creator
Name + meaning: Cantata, which is a medium-length narrative piece of music for voices with instrumental accompaniment, typically with solos, chorus, and orchestra. no nicknames
Gender: she/her
Sexuality: Unknown
Age: 6 years
Tribe: RainWing
Death: murdered
Family: unknown
Friends: Aureli, Alen, Aiden, Nyx
Powers/abilities: average RainWing abilities
Appearance: Can change scales, usually a lavender color with darker front legs and over the entire frills and on head ridge(?), lavender eyes
Personality: Quiet, similar to Druscilla from buffy, but not insane. really likes music and singing
Backstory: captured by a skywing as an egg, hatched at the same time as Aiden and Nyx, escaped together and found a cave and named it Jasper cave and lived there ever since. They found Aureli and Alen but that's another story.
Other: that's it
RATING AND COMMENTS~
I'm going to be rating these out of 10 and the total will be the seperate ratings added together, max is 150/150
#1 that's reasonable for this kind of OC. 4/10
#2 that's ok as long as this OC is not for an official fanfic 3/10
#3 very creative! i see you did your research ;) 7/10
#4 correct. there is a gender and that's all you need 5/10
#5 that's ok as long as it's just unknown to the character itself and not unfinished character design :) 4/10
#6 TIME AND AGE. EXISTS. you win! 5/10
#7 I don't really care for RainWings but it would be bad judging to give a low rating just for this kind of reason so 4/10 because RainWing OC's are pretty common
#8 interesting.. you should make a short story about that! 6/10
#9 same as #5, unknown families are pretty overused but there's a reason for this so I'll rate it 5/10
#10 cool. 6/10 for the unusual names
#11 ok 5/10
#12 very nice I haven't seen that in the rainforest yet 7/10
#13 cool but I don't know Druscilla so 4/10
#14 Haven't seen this yet but kinda bland 4/10
#15 yes
Total score: 7/10
Byeee
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