Does it look ok? Or was my other one better. I also over accessorized.

Little backstory here:
Moonseed was raised by her aunt after her mother vanished in a lightning storm. Her aunt worked as a close advisor to the Leafwing queen, so she became friends with the twin prince and princess, thorn and Ivy. Her aunt never liked her, and was always mean to her, so when she turned 7 (dragon years) she ran away and lived in the jungle for a little while. One day she was discovered by a group of thieves, and was kidnapped by them. Blah blah blah, still figuring out details, she joins them. They're thieves, but they steal from the queen, so they have a like an underground castle built.

It's confusing, even to me.

This is the old one.