For caramel_pigeon

Name: Blooddrawer (Blood.)

Edgy. The double "d" is kind of odd. I like it, though.

Gender: Male.

Okay.

Tribe: FlameWings (coppery or dark orange colored dragons with ridged, thick scales and generally muscular builds. royal FlameWings have a flame-like pattern across their stomachs, as well as having redder eyes. FlameWings all have fire-resistant scales, and some have firescales. straight horns with sharp edges, and spiky tails. blooddrawer, however, has more of a svelte body shape, and his scales are oddly lacking in fire-resistance. flamewings generally make fun of each other's blood purity as fun, and are a combative tribe.)

Thanks for the description of his Tribe! They seem cool. 'FlameWings' is kind of an overused name for a tribe, but oh well. I'm curious why he's lacking fire resistance? Is that just something FlameWings are born without sometimes? I'd like an explanation for that, please.

Rank: Warrior/night guard.

Ok.. interesting.

Lives: Scorched Palace (defends the royals.)

Makes sense. I like that it's called the Scorched Palace, that's an interesting name.

Appearence: Light, coppery scales, with amber eyes, and ash-yellow belly scales. His tail is especially spiky, and his wings are larger than normal FlameWings. As mentioned before, he has a more svelte body than most other FlameWings.

Okay. What about any jewelry or something? Male dragons wear jewelry too. I like that you describe him as svelte, but you could still be more descriptive than that, like height. But overall, this is a nice appearance, I like the combination of orange and yellow.

Personality: Skittish, a bit cowardly, not sure where his loyalties lie, sort of smart.

This could be a lot more descriptive. I like what you have so far, but you could definitely add to it. One way is to describe him with full sentences instead of just listing off personality traits. It gives a much clearer description of the personality. Give him more negative and positive traits. It's also good to describe things he likes and dislikes, his hobbies, and things like that.

Family: His mother's name is Copper, his father's name is Charcoal, and his distant cousin is Pyre, another FlameWing who's quite two-faced.

Okay, sounds good.

Other: He's sort of confused about his orientation, is gay.

Relatable.

So.. the person who submitted Blooddrawer didn't include a backstory. I let them know and gave them a while to add one if they wanted, but I got no reply. So, I'm going to assume that the backstory was either forgotten or that he doesn't have one.

If the backstory was accidentally left out, feel free to re-submit Blooddrawer, preferably with more detail in his personality as well. If he doesn't have a backstory, you definitely need to add one. It's one of the most important part of characters. I'm also curious about his Tribe.. what it's like in the FlameWing kingdom, for example.

Overall
2/10. I can't give him a very good rating when he has no backstory. His personality also seems very underdeveloped. His appearance is better, but could use work. Overall, he's alright so far, but needs a lot adding on to.