For @sophiesaurus1

Name: Kelp

This is a canon name, but she only appears once, so I suppose it doesn't really matter. It's cute, and not *too* overused.

Gender: Dragoness

Heh, sounds fancy

Tribe: Seawing/Forest tribe (explained in backstory)

Oh, this sounds interesting!

Rank in tribe: Revolutionary gang thing/Baker

Hmm..

Residence: The forest tribe owns territory of the Rainforest, Sand kingdom and the ice kingdom. (Explained in backstory)

That's kind of cool. Why are they called the forest tribe if it also includes the sand and Ice kingdoms? Seems odd, because those places don't have any forests.

Appearance: A light  purple with a darker purple sail and webs between her talons, her horns are slightly twisted and the inside of her wings are a few shades paler than her dominant scale colour. Kelp has deep sea green eyes that almost look black, the inside of kelp's ears are a dark purple and her seawing patterns emit a green-indigo colour. several strings of pearls wrapped around her horns, a silver chain around her neck and a silver wristband dotted with skyfire.

Can SeaWings be purple? I mean, Indigo was kinda purple, but still a bluish color. I'm not sure, but I thought they could only be blue or green. I'd recommend changing this to purplish-blue, and not pure purple, so she's still a normal SeaWing color.

You should include her body shape as well, like height or weight. It's important to know more than just the colors of your OC.

Personality: Kelp can be a bit of an air head, she is very absent-minded and has little to no patience. Kelp gets emotional very easily, and often complains if she doesn't get what she wants. She loves being praised, but dislikes insects, stopping her from attending any trip to the rainforest. Kelp is very bashful around those she loves very dearly, and whenever she is in an awkward situation she usually just tries to strike up a conversation with someone she knows. She can easily get herself in dilemmas, but she can also be very careless at times and a bit clever.

This is good! The traits all go well and are a healthy balance of good and bad. I like that her absent-mindedness affects her backstory, too. Not much else to say here, good job!

Family

Pear ( Adoptive mother, a mostly dark and pale blue rainwing )
Pineapple ( Adoptive father, a mostly orange and yellow rainwing )
Queen Algae ( Blood-Mother, a murky sea green seawing )
King Seagull ( Blood-father, a very pale blue seawing with hints of orange )

Okay, good names. The hints of orange in Seagull are interesting, but I suppose they're possible, since Anemone has hints of pink.

(Still a WIP)
Backstory: Kelp was born on the royal family, but her mother died from a sickness while Kelp was only 5 moons old. Therefore she was appointed queen early(she was 3 when appointed) as she was she only heir at that time, she of course got a little bit of help from her father. Her father refused to let a small dragonets take over the kingdom and get stressed by Citizens' problems so he took on the throne himself. The royal family got a bad name from her father's decision, the residents disobeyed them a lot more as the kingdom disliked her father's disrespect toward the tradition of Queens, and that he shouldn't have been in control of the kingdom. Due to disrespect toward her father, he was later assassinated. Kelp gave up her role as a Queen/princess, she appointed a random seawing to be queen. Little did she know, the seawing was animus, and the kingdom of the sea fell into havoc under the seawing's power and greed for destruction. Kelp helped evacuate the seawings, their 'Queen' spreading havoc throughout all of phyrria as her twisted ways soon ended by a stab from behind. Phyrria was destroyed, the different tribes left to the most untouched kingdoms, most going to the ice kingdom, and most to the sand and sky kingdom. The many tribes in the three kingdoms expanded their territories, before the sky kingdom spread to own the sea, sky, and mud kingdom. The sand kingdom spread to the rain kingdom and later joined with the ice kingdom. The ice kingdom and sky kingdom continued to rebuild their new territory and the dragons loved being with each other. So the ice kingdom and sky kingdom changed their tribes, to the mountain tribe and the Forest tribe(Ik, lazy names). Wars over territory began, the two tribes continuing to try and claim land to hunt and feed their people as famine hushed the land, Kelp tried living normally through this with her adoptive parents until creating a revolutionary rebellion with her friends of all different tribes to become the seperate tribes again.

Definitely a pretty original backstory, I'll give you that. It's interesting and would make a great fanfiction. I do have some problems though; why did she just appoint a random dragon? Surely she had a female relative; aunt, cousin, sister, anything? And animus blood runs in the royal family, so it would make sense. Also, the ending seems incomplete. Starting a rebellion seems like it should be the main focus of the story, as that's a huge thing to do. But, you don't really say much about it. She's successful, I'm assuming? How does she do it? Does she built a huge following? What did the queens of the Tribes think about it? Just, a lot of info missing there.

Other: All her friends are apart of her little rebellion to retake life as the 7 seperate tribes. Procrastination is her enemy. The seawing pattern thing closest to her right ear doesn't light up, resolving in many Aquatic failures.

It's good that her friends tag along, she would definitely need help. It would be very Mary-Sueish for her to start a rebellion all on her own, even if she is a princess. I like the detail about the Aquatic, I've never seen someone add that to an OC before.

Overall
I'll give Kelp a 7/10. I like how original the backstory is, but it could still use work. Her appearance could be changed as well, and should include her body shape. Her personality is great!