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Name- Preadolescence

Gender - Female

Age- 5 years old

Tribe- Rainwing

Appearance- She is usually a pinkish - purple with hints of turquoise in her scales, dark reddish-black horns, spikes, and claws, frill color is purple faded to pink, a scar over her left eye making her blind in that eye, eyes color is yellow

Personality- she is very kind- hearted, sweet and smart, she hates nightwings because of what they did to her tribe and plus they are dumb dumbs ( as she says), not sassy or shy, she is not calm at all she is very hyper whenever she as sweet fruits

Abilities- Venom in her two front fangs, can change her scale colored

Occupation- Student in Jma, her winglet is Aventurine with my ocs only

Residence - Jade Mountain Academy

Family - Pomegranate , Father, usully a pinkish orange colored scalesEmerald, Mother, usually a Dark Green colored with hints of Black in her scales Iridescence, Best friend, usually a light blue like the seawings with hints of darker blue

Backstory - When she was born, she was looking at the other eggs wondering where her parents until a care giver name Python came and picked her up with three other dragonets, one of them was Iridescence. She was put in the rainwing hatchery until she was two years old, when she was put into a venom test with other adult rainwings, When it was her turn ,two other rainwings, a pinkish orange rainwing and a dark green colored rainwing, The pink rainwing spit venom on a flower and she did the same, the venom stop when her venom was mixed with the other rainwing, the pink rainwing picked her up and smiled, she knew that he was her father and the green rainwing was her mother. Is that how youcan tell who is family in Rainwing or did you make that up? If it's not Cannon, it should be, I think that's really coolmWhen she was four years old, she got accepted to JMA with her best friend Iridescence, she has been there ever since

Other - Has a crush on Iridescence, Has pet sloth name Lilli, is Bisexual, likes mangos

WingletSilverstream, reminds me of Silverstream from

seawingSkye,

skywingGyrfalcon,

icewingMazerunner,

nightwing

Eucalyptus, sandwing

Duckweed, mudwing

Good:

Overall she was really good! I don't really have much else to comment on this(Sorry..) But I have a question. Is Spitting Venom a way rainwings can find their relatives, or Was that something you are ? Either way, it's pretty cool!

bad/how too improve:

The personality needs a little work. Try adding a few more negative traits to contradict the positive ones!

Overall: 9.5