Belongs too: @Dawnstar16

Name: Sidewinder

Love the name!

Age: 32 years

Gender: Male

Tribe: SandWing

Appearance: Sidewinder has pale sand colored scales with a lighter underbelly and orange wings. He has bright green eyes and short horns. He also has claw marks across his left eye that left scars. He wears two gold necklaces. One plain gold, and the other with an amber pendant.

Personality: Sidewinder is a dragon not to be messed with. He is very aggressive toward his enemies and does not appreciate anyone contradicting his ways. The only dragons he's ever loved was a SandWing named Sahara and Shadowwalker, a NightWing. These are the only to dragons that managed to get past his aggressive nature. If you're one of the lucky few who can win his heart or become his friend, Sidewinder will never abandon you or ever allow you to get hurt under his watch. When your his friend, Sidewinder will protect you and be very open about his feelings.

Good balance of negative and positive qualities! I would still like to see one or Two more positive traits please.

Abilities: Poison barb, Flight, Breathe fireOccupation: Guard

Cool!

Residency: Simple house near the Palace.Makes sense^.^

Family:

Mother: Scorch 

Status: Alive

Occupation: Teacher

Father: Sandstorm

Status: Alive 

Occupation: Hunter

Brother: Mojave

Status: Alive

Occupation: Student

Brother: Mongoose

Status: AliveOccupation: Student

Sister: Gila

Status: Alive

Occupation: Guard

Sister: Blaze

Status: Alive 

Occupation: Student

Backstory: When Sidewinder became an adult, he moved close to his parents and became a guard for Queen Viper. His sister, Gila, also became a guard and together they grew together and protected the kingdom. After a few years, his parents had more dragonets. Sidewinder soon met Mongoose, Mojave, and Blaze. He and Gila helped their parents teach the new siblings how to fight, hunt, and anything else they needed to know. When Mojave, Mongoose, and Blaze all left for the academy, Sidewinder and Gila became engulfed in their work and soon grew apart. Sidewinder soon met Sahara.

How did he meet Sahara?

The pair loved each other and fought together as the war between SandWings and SkyWings raged on. Unfortunately, Sahara was taken prisoner and killed before Sidewinder could help her. Sidewinder, consumed by grief, quit and became a soldier. He learned better techniques to fight and eventually left the ranks to become a guard again.

What about Shadowwalker?

Good:

 great personality! Its balanced out well between the good traits and the bad traits! I like hose you didn't kill his whole family when he was young, as most people do(I'm also guilty of doing this with my main OC, Stargazer) and I like how you gave a description on his family's jobs too!

Bad:

Can you please give a little more info on Sahara? You also mentioned Shadowalker in Sidewinder's personality, but not his background. You you explain a little more about Shadowwalker?

Overall: 9\10

Good job!!!Sorry it took so long to update!!!