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In an old godown in some isolated area. Someone is sitting on a chair, his hands & lets are tied with ropes. Mouth covered with a cloth. He is trying hard to release himself but failed to do so. Meanwhile the person who kidnapped him came inside & started laughing on his condition.

So the kidnapped person is Neil & the kidnapper is Ashish mehta.
Interesting na, both prakash & Ashish kidnaps each others children. And now lets see what they both gonna do with them.

Ashish removes the cloth from neil's mouth to let him speak.

Ashish: Ahaa jante ho ladke, bohot sukoon mil raha hai mujhe tumhe aise bandha hua aur majboor dekh kar. Tumhari family ke tarah tumne bhi mujhe bohot pareshan kiya hai.
But finally maine tumhe dhoond hi liya..

FLASHBACK:-

When Neil came & saw that avni is no where. He then talked to someone on phone call. But then suddenly someone hits his head with something. His head started spinning, but still he was conscious. And Ashish came in front of him. And his mens hold neil..

Ashish: Kahan ja rhe ho ladke? Akhir dhoond hi liya na tujhe. Bata kahan hai avni?

Neil's head is paining but he started smiling thinking something.

Ashish: Lagta hai ise bohot zor se chot lagi hai sar pe, isiliye iska mental balance bigad gaya hai😅

Neil: Uncle,, mera mental balance toh bilkul perfect hai par lagta hai ki aap buddhe ho gye ho isliye bina soche kuch bhi kar dete ho..😜

Ashish: Kya matlab?

Neil: Matlab yeh ki apko avni yahan kahin par dikh rhi hai kya? Hai kya avni yahan par? Mujhe toh nhi dikh rhi!
Are haan avni yahan par hogi toh dikhegi na, but use to mere dad le gye kidnap kar ke..

Ashish is getting very angry.
Ashish: Chup chap mujhe bata do ki kahan hai meri beti.. warna..

Neil: Warna kya uncle, kya karoge aap? Maroge mujhe.. maro.. come on hit me. Kis baat ka wait kar rhe ho..
But haan mujhe maar diya toh apni beti ko bhi bhool jana..

Ashish: SHUT up. Kuch nhi karoge tum log avni ko.. main meri beti ko kuch nhi hone dunga..

Neil: Accha, yeh to waqt hi bataiga🤣🤣

Ashish signalled something to his men & they tied Neil & take him with them.

FLASHBACK ENDS;

Ashish: Ab jaldi se batao meri beti kahan hai?

Neil: Hahaaha Hahaaha.. apko kya lagta hai ki mujhe pakad kar aap avni tak pahuch jayenge..😏

Ashish: Mujhe aisa lagta nhi hai. But i know ki tum hi mujhe avni tak pahuchao ge..

Neil: Then u r absolutely wrong. Apko kabhi pata nhi chalega ki avni kahan hai.. aur mujhe pakad ke koi fayda nhi hai. Jab tak aap mujhse pata karne ki koshish karoge. Mere papa apki beti ko finish kar denge..😬😬

Ashish: Akhir dikha hi di na tune apni aukat, akhir hai toh tu Prakash ka hi beta na. Main toh hamesha se hi janta tha. Yehi hai tumhara asli chehra.. aur wo jo tum avni avni karte the na, "main avni se bohot pyaar karta huin" "i love her" plz trust me.
I knew it ki woh sab natak tha.. yeh sab tum baap bete ki planning thi avni ko fasane ki. Aur ek meri emotional fool beti hai, jo tumhari baat me aa gyi aur khud ko problem mein daal liya..
But u don't worry main avni ko har haal mein dhoond kar hi rahunga..
Chahe uske liye mujhe kuch bhi karna pade..

Neil: Aap kuch nhi kar sakte.. kuch bhi nhi😂

Ashish: Last time tumse puch raha huin bata do avni kahan hai.. warna kuch bhi batane ke liye zinda nhi rahoge..

Neil: Do whatever u want to do. But haan agar mujhe kuch bhi hua to mere dad apki beti ko bhi zinda nhi chorenge.. anyways waise bhi mujhe nhi pata ki dad ne avni ko kahan rakha hai. So u r just wasting ur time here..

Ashish: Ok then, ab tumhe kuch karne ki zarurat nhi hai. Ab jo bhi karna hai woh main karunga. But haan avni tak to tumhi mujhe pahuchao ge & that is for sure..
And he left from there..

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Somewhere in a dark room.

Person: Hmm.. toh ab avni Prakash ke paas aur Neil Ashish ke paas hai. Ab game kuch interesting hua hai. Now it will be fun. Lets see Kaun kise pehle maarta hai. Jo bhi ho mujhe toh bas popcorn ready rakhna hai aur is love- hate- family drama ko enjoy karna hai..😏😆😆
He laughs evilly...

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Ashish is talking to someone on phone call..

Person: Hello uncle, Neil mil gaya na apko?

Ashish: Haan kushal, tumne jahan bataya tha wahin mila woh. Aur humne sahi time par pahuch kar pakad liya use..

Kushal: Thats great uncle, it means ki avni bhi mil gyi hogi. Thank god & plz uncle now i request u ki aap Neil ko ab jaane dijiye..

Ashish: No kushal avni nhi mili hai..

Kushal: What do u mean avni nhi mili, uncle woh to Neil ke sath hi hogi na?

Ashish: No kushal, Prakash ne avni ko kidnap kar liya hai. Hum jab wahan pahuche to sirf Neil mila, avni nhi..

Kushal: Oh no uncle, it means ki Neil ne avni ko dhoka diya. He don't love her..

Ashish: Are mujhe to pehle hi pata tha ki woh ladka trust karne ke layak nhi hai. Lekin avni ne meri baat nhi suni..

Kushal: Now What uncle, kahin unhone avni ko kuch..

Ashish: No, avni ko kuch nhi hoga..

Kushal: But ab kahan par hogi avni.. Neil ne kuch bataya kya?

Ashish: Nhi usne kuch bhi nhi bataya.. kushal beta plz tum koshish karo na pata karne ki. Neil ki location bhi tumne hi batayi thi. Avni ke bare mein bhi kuch info nikalne ki koshish karo na..

Kushal: Uncle maine Neil ka phone location track kiya tha. Isliye Uska pata chal gya. But avni ke paas toh uska phone bhi nhi hoga. Main kya karun phir..

Ashish: Humein jald hi kuch karna hoga kushal, isse pehle ki bohot deer ho jaye..
And i think i have a plan.

Kushal: What plan uncle?

Ashish: Hum avni ko nhi dhund payenge. But hum Neil ke zariye avni tak pahuch to sakte hain..

Kushal: What are u trying to say uncle??

Ashish explains him everything..

Kushal: This plan is good uncle. But are u sure ki isme koi risk nhi hai. I mean agar khanna's ne koi smartness dikhane ki koshish ki. Ya phir Neil ke milne ke baad avni ko kuch..

Ashish: No kushal aisa kuch nhi hoga. Jab tak mujhe avni nhi mil jati, main Neil ko nhi chodne wala.

Kushal: And uncle aap Neil ko to kuch nhi karenge na?

Ashish: No kushal, see khanna's agar dobara hamari life mein interfere nhi karte to mujhe unse koi matlab nhi tha. And abhi bhi main Neil ko kuch nhi karunga agar unhone meri beti ko kuch nhi kiya toh.

Kushal: Ok uncle. Aap Mr khanna se baat kijiye. And if u need my help then plz don't hesitate.

Ashish: Sure kushal. Bye..

Kushal: Bye uncle. Take care.

Call disconnected;;

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Ashish called Prakash;

Prakash: Lagta hai tumhe pata chal gya hai ki tumhari beti mere paas hai. Aur kuch hi deer mein bhagwan ke paas hogi😏

Ashish: Don't u dare.. agar avni ko kuch bhi hua toh apne ek laute bete ko bhi bhool jana.

Prakash: Accha tum kuch bhi bologe aur main believe kar lunga. I m not a fool like u..

Ashish: Oh really, but i think u r a bigger fool than me. Avni ko to kidnap kar liya par apne bete ko wahin road par akele chod diya.

Prakash: Don't lie.. Neil ko maine wahin chod diya tha lekin neil toh wahan se.. ..

Ashish: Wahan se kya prakash? Unfortunately, woh wahan se jahan bhi jane wala tha, usse pehle hi hum us tak pahuch gye. Aur ab bechare ki bohot buri halat hai. Shayad zyada der tak zinda bhi na reh paye..

Prakash: DON'T.. don't u dare to harm my son ashish, otherwise ur daughter will have to face the consequences!

Ashish: Haha hah.. oh really Prakash. Tumhe kya lagta hai, ki main tumhe janta nhi huin? Mat bhoolo ki hum 20 saal se ek dusre ko hate karte hain.. lekin usse pehle we were friends.. veryy close friends😏 aur isliye main samajh gaya huin ki tumhara motive sirf avni ko harm karna nhi hai.. warna avni abhi tak zinda nhi hoti. Kuch aur bhi karna chahte ho tum..
Sahi kaha na maine??

Prakash: Woohoo.. well done ashish, very well done. Tum aaj bhi mujhe kitni acchi tarah se jante ho na. Sahi kaha tumne ki mera motive sirf avni ko harm karna nhi hai. I want to destroy ur whole family. I want to finish the Mehta's. Jiske liye avni is the first step only..

Ashish: Stay in ur dreams Prakash. Coz main aisa kabhi hone nhi dunga.
And for ur kind information. Meri family ko baad me destroy karna, pehle apne bete ko toh bacha lo.

Prakash: Come to the point ashish. Kya chahte ho?

Ashish: Ok then I m being very straightforward. Let's make a deal.

Prakash: What deal?

Ashish: Tum avni mujhe de do aur Neil ko le Jao..

Prakash: Itni difficulty se toh maine tumhari beti ko kidnap kiya hai ashish. Toh tumhe aisa kiun lagta hai ki main itni aasani se tumhari baat maan lunga?

Ashish: Ok then, it's ur decision. But uske baad Neil ke sath jo bhi hoga then it won't be my fault.

Prakash: Neil ko harm karne ka sochna bhi mat ashish warna tumhari beti.. ...

Ashish: Ya ya ya I know Prakash, warna tum avni ko nhi chodoge etc etc.. thik hai let them both die. What say??

Prakash after thinking for a few minutes said..

Prakash: Ok I accept ur deal ashish.

Ashish: Hmm, good decision.

Prakash: But don't harm Neil!

Ashish: Same goes with u Prakash, don't try to harm my daughter as well..

Prakash: Ok.

Call disconnected;

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Prakash: Accha plan banaya hai ashish ne. But what can we do now. Neil ko bachane ke liye avni ko wapas dena hi hoga. Don't worry son I won't let anything happen to you.

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Ashish: Prakash se toh baat kar li & I hope sab kuch plan ke accordingly ho. Aur Prakash koi smartness na Kare. Lekin usse pehle Neil ka kuch karna hoga kahin ye ladka koi problem na create kar de..

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In the dark room;

Person: Oh, so they make a deal or we can say exchange offer. Take ur son & give my daughter😨😆
What a family drama..
But a simple love story only with some family drama without any twist is boring no. I think we should add some flavour to it. Hmmm... Itni asaani se dono love birds bach jayenge toh maza nhi ayega. Let's have some more drama & suspense..
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Hey fam, hope u all r good. And again sorry for the late update but this time I am a bit upset coz bcoz of my late updates I think readers are loosing interest in the story as u can see in the beginning of the story every chappie have 100+ votes but from the chapter "Kisi roz tumse mulaqaat hogi". The votes are decreasing day by day. And in the last update there is only 54 votes. Sorry for complaining, I know it's my fault. I am giving updates after so many months. But then also I m asking for the last time, should I complete this story or should I leave it here only???
And this is for all the silent readers, plzz guys at least do vote for the story.
That's it. And sorry for the long lecture also.
When I will get atleast 80+ votes then only I will give the next update.

Till then.
Good bye👋👋

Much love
Alia😇

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