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Sorry sorry I just wanted to see ur reactions 🤭🤭

Maaf kr do baachhe Ko🥺🥺🥺

Pr I'm feeling so blessed to receive so much love♥️
It feels as if I've known y'all from ages😍😍

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Thank u soooooooooo much guys. I'm overwhelmed. I can never thank y'all enough for all ur love, follow and comments ♥️
Much love to all of u🥰

And of course I've decided to write this story, no doubt 😌

Special thanks to these cutie pies AvniAyesha0786 and bunniesrosefor tagging others too🥰
Keep supporting.....
So here's the first chapter of my story.....
Happy reading...
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A big bungalow is seen beautifully decorated. The nameplate of the house shows "KHANNA MANSION"😌.
Inside we can see a 60+ lady instructing decorators.

Lady: Khotyo, jaldi jaldi haath chalao, party aaj hi h. (Murmuring) Paise lene to aage aage rehte h aur kaam dekho zara inka🤦. (Looking upwards as if talking to god) Hayo mere Rabba, iss umar me bhi mujhe hi kaam karna pad rha h😩.

Listening her, a man in his late 40's arrives and tries to calm her down.

Man: Are shaant ho jaiye bebe😄, aapki tabiyat aise bhi theek nhi h. Dr. ne aapko stress lene k liye mana kiya h. Plz calm down.

Lady: Kaise shaant ho jau Sunny? Ye log kitna dheere dheere kaam kr rhe h. Upar se teri vo voti (wife) bhi kisi kaam ki nhi. Ptani Abhi tk kyu nhi aayi? Uska solah shringar khtm nhi hua kya Abhi tk🤨?

(So the lady is our pyaari 😍 as well as cool😎 bebe urf Harleen Khanna and man is none other than fandom's fav and my personal fav, after Avneil, Prakash Khanna urf Papa ji😍, the best father and father in law ever shown on ITV 😌)

(Neelu Kohli as Harleen Khanna👆,Outfit and look)

(Don't mind Bebe's serious expressions 😅....I couldn't get her good expression picture in this outfit😁.....I hope y'all will not scold thish chotu sha bachha🥺🥺)

(Sanjay Swaraj as Prakash Khanna 👆,Same outfit and look )

Then comes a lady in her early 40's running and starts explaining in her world famous tuti- futi English.

(Shruti Ulfat as Shweta Khanna👆 ,Outfit and look)

(Yes that's Shweta Khanna urf Madam Madona and her English....😂😂)

Shweta: Bebe, it's nots mine mistakes. These mans don't understands whats I says.

Bebe: Madam Madona jaisi teri English h na, ek normal Insaan nhi smjh skta, whats u says. Hayee rabba, tere chakkar me meri bhi English barbaad ho jayegi🤦. Bhagwan k liye Shweta mehmano k saamne English ki taang mt todna. Hindi me bol Lena🙏🙏.

S: But bebes!

B: Nhi Maine kuch nhi sunna, bol diya to bs bol diya🤫. Tu kisike saamne ek English word nhi bolegi. Aur vo chod tujhe maine catering ka dhyaan rkhne Ko bola tha, tune check kiya ya sjne me hi sara samay khtm kr diya🤨?

S(stammering): Vo.....bebe..vo ...voh... actuallys...

P(defending his wife): Ha bebe, Shweta ji ne check Kiya tha tayyar hone jane se pehle aur abhi ek baar m phirse dekh k aa jata hu.

B: Sunny tu apni voti ki galtiyo pe parda daalna chod de, aur tu hi jaake dekh k aa.

Prakash leaves while Bebe starts seeing and giving a last check to everything and Shweta too helps but not before giving a thankful look to Prakash while he blink his eyes saying no problem. After some time Bebe turns to Shweta and catches her sitting comfortably on sofa and using phn. She goes towards her and shouts.

B: Shweta!!!

S(startling and stammering): J......ji....ji bebe...boliye...whats u wants..

B(cutting her off): Tujhse to kya hi chahiye hoga? Koi kaam to dhang se kr liya kr. Upar jake kya mu dikhayegi?

S(innocently): Yhi dikhaungi bebe. Aur kha se laungi🤷?

B: 🤦Phitte muh!! Tu ye sb chod aur ye bta Tillu aur Ananya kha h?

S: Bebe tillu to tayyar ho rha h. Abhi Abhi gya h, abhi tk preparations hi kr rha tha. Aur Ananyaa.....(stammering) vo...voh...shayad..Yhi khi hogi...yhi pe...

Prakash enters and cuts her off in between.

P: Bebe vo Neil ne bataya tha ki Ananya Neela ji k saath apne ghr gyi h aur vhi se tayyar hoke aayegi.

S: But whys theres Khanna sahab🤷?

B: Kyuki Shweta hum uske saamne preparations nhi kr skte. Ye birthday party uske liye suprise h🤦.

(Till now y'all must have understood and got the answer to the question "Which track is this??" So it's after sending Dayawanti Mehta to jail and it's Avni's Birthday 🥳🥳....chlo readers wish her😁)

S: Pr Tillu ne to mujhe nhi bataya ki ye Ananya k liye suprise h🤨.

B: Sunny tu apni iss pagal voti nu leja mere saamne se, vrna maine isko dhang se smjha dena h.

P: Ji bebe.

He was about to leave but bebe stops him by asking a question.

B: Pr Sunny Ananya gyi kb? Na hame bataya aur na hi jati dikhi.

P: Bebe vo jb aapko chakkar aa gye the to Dr. ne kuch davaiya likh k di thi. Hamne almost sb le aayi thi but kuch paas vale store me mili nhi to m lene Jane vala tha pr....

(I hope y'all remember this when Bebe fainted seeing such a state of Maddy and Kareena)

Flashback...

Avni: Papa ji aap rehne dijiye, m market Jake davaiya le aati hu. Yha Bebe ko aapki zaroorat h.

P: Pr puttar...

Neil(cutting him off): Ha dad Ananya theek kh rhi h. Aap yhi rhiye, m make davai leke aata hu.

A: Nhi Neil m jati hu na.

N: Nhi Ananya tum....

A(cutting him off): Vo actually mujhe Ali se milne cafe bhi Jana h. Bahut din ho gye usse mile aur mujhe kuch kaam bhi h vha to m aate samay davai bhi le aaungi.

Kareena: Super Bhabhi phir to m bhi aapke saath chlti hu. Bahar ghumna bhi ho jayega aur ek kaam krenge, aap Ali bhai k saath ruk jana thodi der aur m davai leke vapas aa jaungi.

Maddy: Pr Kareena iss trh bahar Jaana...

N(cutting her off): Nhi bua, Kareena is right. Use bahar jana chahiye, logo se interact krna chahiye aur naye dost banane chahiye tbhi vo bahri duniya ko face kr payegi. Hm hamesha use aise closet me to nhi rkh skte na?

(Ye kitna ek dusre Ko cut off krte h, kisi Ko bolne hi nhi dete🤦🤦)

P: Ha Maddy, Neil bilkul theek kh rha h. Hamare ghr ki ladkiya bahut strong h aur nhi h to unhe banna chahiye taki vo duniya ki aankho me aankhe daal k baat kr ske 😎.

(Mhari choriya choro se Kam h ke??😎😉)

Maddy nodded and Avni & Kareena went to market.

Flashback ends....

P: Bebe kuch time baad Kareena aapki davaiya leke vaapas aa gyi. Phir mujhe Neil ka msg aya jisme usne bataya ki preparations me problem na ho isliye Neil k kehne pe Neela ji, milne k bahane Ananya Ko Parikh Mansion le gyi aur Maddy aur Kareena ke aane ki Khushi me ye party rkhi gyi h, Aisa Neela ji use batayengi.

B: Ye Tillu ne theek Kiya.

S: Pr usne mujhe kuch kyu ni bataya 🤷?

B: Sunny leja ise meri nazro k saamne se😒.

P(dragging Shweta along with him): Ji Bebe, chaliye Shweta ji aap.

S: Pr Khanna sahab Tillu...

She couldn't continue as Prakash was called by caterers, so she sat on sofa and again started scrolling something on her phn while bebe got a call.
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Meanwhile in a room...

A boy is shown standing in front of a mirror all decked in a beautiful outfit. Handsome, charming, cute ,hot ,all these words failed to explain his looks. But wait🖐️🖐️, he wasn't happy. No, no actually he is having silent tears which are flowing down his cheeks. But why😕? Hey listen he's speaking something.

Boy(shutting his eyes tightly): Today I might lose her forever. Just when I realised my feelings, I ......I knew I love her♥️, everything is drifting from my hands😖. (To himself) No Neil u can't be weak. U can't tie her with u🙂. She deserves all the happiness of this world.

(Ofcourse he is none other than "ek dashing policewala aur apni wifey ka pyaara sa husband🤗" Acp Neil Khanna 😉😉.....obvio.....this is Avneil story🤦😝)

(Zain Imam as Neil Khanna👆, Same outfit and look)

He looks at the mirror ,that is when we can see his eyes are red and puffy due to crying.

N:We were meant to meet, not to stay. Ur happiness matters the most wifey. I'll soon let u free from this "Ehsaan wali relationship"(chuckling)🙂.

("🙂" Zinda Laash ka sign🤪😏)
(Sorry sneak peak me glti se kaash ho gya tha😝😝)
(So guys here's the teaser's part 1😁😁....more to come)

N(tracing one of her photos on his phn and talking to it): Tumhe pta h jb pehli baar tumhe dekha tha na tbhi se tumse pyaar krta hu. What is it said, ya, "love at first sight"♥️. Vo ho gya tha tumse. Jb tum behosh thi aur maine itne kareeb se pehli Baar tumhe dekha tha, trust me Avni uss din se pehle I've never seen any girl as beautiful as u and not even after that. Blki sach to ye h ki m tumhare alava kisiko dekhna hi nhi chahta aur na hi tumse khoobsurat koi ho skta h😍. U r the most beautiful creation of God inside out. The purest soul I've ever met. Aur phir jb tumne aankhe kholi (chuckling) I saw an all new personality "Lady Don"😎. Punch k saath all time ready. (Smiling) I tried my best to deny my feelings for u. Hamesha tumhari aankho me kho jata tha. Dil zoro se dhadak ke kehta tha that I love u♥️, pr maine hamesha sb kuch jaan k bhi nazarandaz kiya. Krta rha pr phir ek din mere dil ki aawaz banke Neela ma aayi and she told me the same. But I was really adamant to accept my feelings aur phir hamari shaadi ho gayi. My heart was the happiest but I was angry as u betrayed me. But then I wanted to help u in getting justice so I accepted this marriage and we worked together. Or saath rehte rehte kb m tumhare itna kareeb aa gya ki vaapas jana ab mushkil ho gya h, pta hi nhi chla. And finally I had to accept that I Neil Khanna has fallen deeply in ur love Mrs. Khanna. Kl jb maine tumhe uss halat me dekha to m dar gya tha. The fear of loosing u overpowered all the arguments between my heart and brain and finally my heart won😌. I accepted that u r one and the only person without whom my life is colourless and meaningless. Pr phir mujhe lga ki ab jb sb theek ho gya h to u'll leave me but with morning's incidents I decided that whatever might be ur decision, I'll confess my love in ur birthday party. (With smile vanishing and newly formed soft tears flowing) Lekin ab Aisa nhi ho skta. Tum meri nhi ho skti😣 aur achha hoga jitne jldi ye baat m accept krlu. 🙂Tumhari khushi me meri khushi h chahe vo mere bina hi kyu na ho. But remember Ms. Avni Ayesha, Neil Khanna was, is and will always be urs, forever🥺.

(Pic👆)(He took it secretly when she was smiling while talking to Bebe)

Neil hugs his phn close to his heart as if embracing her. He then remembers what made him come to the following conclusion. He pinched his eyes close tightly pushing more tears down his now red cheeks, not able to take so much pain😖😖.

Flashback...

Neil was very happy from the time he got to know that it is his Avni's Birthday🎂🎂 and also what added to his happiness was the fact that he'll confess his feelings to her. Though he was nervous but prayed 🤞 that she atleast accept him and about her answer, he is ready to wait for his whole life to receive.
And now he is in Chamko cafe as he called DD to discuss and help with the bestest decoration for the party which is surprise for her and that is the only reason that no one including Neela Ma, Nanno and Ali wished her😉. He wanted it to be the best birthday of hers since he got to know that she hasn't celebrated her birthday from 15 yrs as she wanted to celebrate her birth after defeating Dayawanti Mehta.
It has been only 5 min that he is waiting for DD but he is behaving like typical girlfriend waiting impatiently, cursing DD in all possible ways and minutes are passing like ages for him taking their own sweet time🤭🤭.
He gets up from his chair and tries to contact DD but then he hears her laughing. He follows the voice and sees her. "Her laughter", "Her face", "Her smile ", everything about her is so damn special❤. He wanted to go to her but he sees that she is helping with and talking to her Best Friend Ali.

Av: Ali tu na Abhi bhi nhi sudhra. (Keeping the box and hitting his head a bit) Ali tera kya hoga Ali😆?

They look at each other and burst in fits of laughter.

Ali(dreamily): Yrr Avni Vo bachpan k din Kitne khoobsurat the na. Kaash hm kabhi bade hi na hote! Tu vhi choti si Avni hoti aur m chota Ali.

Av: Ha aur tu abhi bhi gol gappa hota, mota Sa🤭.

Al: Ha to tu bhi to chutki si thi, maine kuch bola? I loved u however u were na 😒 and even now I do.

Ali said everything in a flow, he himself didn't realize that he confessed his love while Neil who was enjoy 2 besties' cute bickering got serious as he knew about Ali's feelings and now both waited for Avni's answer.

Av(turrning to Ali after keeping the last box on the shelf): Ha to thik h na. Maine bhi tujh jaise gol gappe ko apna friend banaya. Tujhe jaisa tu h, vaise hi accept kiya. I also loved u and still do the way u r to tune aisa kaunsa teer maar liya😒.

Ali was standing there taken aback by her words. Did she just confess that she loved him?

While there was a person who was shaken by her words. He freezed at the spot. His body went numb. He didn't want to trust his ears. He felt as if 1000s of knives have stabbed him together right at his heart 💔. He wanted to run from there but was not able to move his own legs as if someone tied him with some magic.

To confirm his doubt Ali asked her.

Al(trying to hide his excitement and behaving as normal as he could) : Avni tune kha ki tu mujhse pyaar krti h ?

Av(facing him) : Ha bhyii, u heard it right, m krti hu tujhse pyaar. (Pulling his cheeks) I love u mere gol gappe🤭!

That's it. The little hope that ignited in him, died. He died there itself 💔. His hopes, his dreams of being with her, having a beautiful future with her shattered. He stumbled back not able to take the weight of her words. They echoed in his mind like a recorded tape. He saw that Ali was smiling foolishly and DD came suddenly from backside and held him, preventing him from falling. He didn't know what to do. It felt as if someone was snatching his heart away but his hands were tied. Not thinking anymore he ran from there as fast as he could, reached his bachelor pad and locked himself not caring about answering highly tensed DD's questions. He broke down completely as he slided against the door. He yelled at top of his voice "Avniiiii" trying to take out "his pain" which was eating him💔. He got up and scattered everything taking out his frustration and then he brought his punching bag and throwing his shirt at some end of the room started punching the bag mercilessly 😖. After some time he was sweating badly. His knuckles started paining but all that was overpowered by the pain his heart was going through.

He held his bag and breathed heavily. All exhausted he fell on the edge of the bed and not able to resist his heavy eyelids dozed off 😴.
After 1 hr his ringing phn disturbed his sleep. He opened his eyes. His head was throbbing badly but he cared less and rejected the call as he wasn't in a state to talk to someone. He then messaged DD that he is fine as he knew DD must be tensed and texted Neela Ma to pick Avni from cafe and take her to Parikh Mansion and informed the same to Prakash. He would've sent her there as the birthday was a surprise for her but till evening but now he didn't have the courage to face her. Neil then got up and taking another pair of clothes went to take a shower to calm himself down. After having shower, he went to make the further preparations as her happiness mattered more than "his pain". Then he reached his house and started getting ready but was crying at the same time😭😭😭.

(Flashback ends...)

He comes out of the flashback when he hears Shweta Calling him. He gets up, goes in bathroom and splashes water on his face many times trying to look normal. Plastering a smile, he moves down.

(So now the question "Why was Neil crying?? " is answered 🤗.....)

Anddd......

(He is moving down bhyii🤦)

(More👇)

(Bs Thoda sa aur😝😝)

(Almost there....😁😁)

(Bss bhyii this chota bachha can write thish much only 🥺🥺)
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So guys it's a wrap😄

So how was it??

3312 words... Huff 🥵 ...I didn't expect it to be too long 😂

I hope it wasn't monotonous and somewhere up to ur expectations , I just wanted to show Neil's pain 😅

3 days, not even a perfect chapter, 14 followers, 41 votes and 54 comments (because half are my replies🤪) What can I even ask for🥺🥺, how could I even dare not to write😅🤪

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At last but not the least, A big thanks to all of u ❤

Much love 💝

C ❤