Demented Paint

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Author: @driftingoceans

Summary: His art was lovely, breathtaking. His art was deadly.

Reviewer's Remarks:
*Warning: This review may contain spoilers.*
Firstly, I would like to discuss the book's summary. The beautiful and lyrical words do not suffice as a summary. Readers tend to select books which have compelling summaries and offer an insight to the story. Though the words offered in the summary are appealing it does not succeed in offering the readers an insight.

The plot and the concept of the story are promising. The story revolves around a female youth - I suppose she is a high school student. The book is a mystery teen fiction which may contain certain thematic elements recommended for mature readers.

The tale discusses our lead character falling in love with a male youth. It is revealed that the individual is in fact a deranged personage - also, he kidnaps Serenity (the main character).

The story is labelled as a 'mystery' though I do not understand why, since the readers are already aware of the kidnappers identity . I would like to apologise if I have missed out a detail which proves this to be a 'mystery' but I have not recognised any particular details which is evidence to the story being labelled as a mystery.

The writing is simple yet the words are arranged in such a way that the story is beautifully depicted. The characters are appealing, though there is room for character development.

This is a heavy, fast-paced thriller fit for fans of dark young adult fiction.

Rating (out of five): 3.75

A note to the author: Your story has a lot of potential and I suggest you polish it a little more through editing - to fix the misconceptions. Overall, I really liked your work!

Link:http://my.w.tt/UiNb/JGWakjo1Ku

Reviewer: CookieMonster_359

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