Book Name -  Separated by the Stars

Author         - maplecornia

Reviewer     -  LyraBloodRose

COVER: 3/5

The cover of the book projects a good luminous look and the effect of the tiny sparkling stars spreads more filling and nice spark on the cover however since the story is about the ancient times and the look of The Lead Bang Chan displayed on the cover of the book doesn't certainly match even though it's good enough. Because in the cover his costume and look are of the modern times and he looks more like an idol. So this may not seem the proper cover for the story line but it would look good in any other story of the modern times. It would have been good if his look in the poster would be more likely a costume of any old times or traditional period style according to the story base. But still, the overall design and the  poster looks very good.

TITLE: 4/5

The Title of the story ‘Separated by the Stars’ perfectly fits the story base and the way it just displays the whole story in a line is elegant yet deep. The font that's used here is good and neat as it is showing the curves in it and the ways it's setting to the story and matching the fantasy theme which is a perfect match for the book.
However it would be improvised a little where the title color would have been a little bit more bright so that it could catch the reader's  attention because the background image is more dominating and making the title to be shown a little dull.
Since the twinkling bright stars and also the aesthetic picture of Bang Chan in a bright cinematic mode is shown more bright and dominant. It would be more good if the author can increase the font size a little bit to make it more big and bright so that it could match perfectly with the whole theme.

SYNOPSIS: 7/10

The story briefly shows us a smooth and a simple yet beautiful journey of the two leads where the transition in their relationship develops from a bonded deep friendship to love that could be seen more than deep and reforming through their both meeting as adults. And how they get to know about each other's feelings and the way they get past it and continue further into the life of responsibility and duties to fulfill and the answerable society of the ancient period. The sacrifices they made and the love they hold deep in their heart and the right choice to pick. All the things that make them more understanding to each other and the path they walk into with all the emotions buried and held even though together or not. The whole story can be seen with a simple yet elegant and sophisticated periodical story involving pure and deep feelings that can touch everyone's heart with soft beauty.

EXECUTION: 8.5/10

The author excels creating a narrative that is both simple and soothing with a smooth and elegant prose style even though it's an ancient BL story it's displayed just as two humans when they fell in love simply with their feelings and sometimes when fate plays a cruel card on them and they can't be together yet finding their happiness in their own another person and continuing with their life in fulfilling the responsibilities and duties. The way the author executed the story which is imbued with sophistication portraying the two protagonists heartfelt simplicity in feelings yet deep and pure. Author has made it seem that despite the time period the depiction of love is timeless and universal which displays the story gracefully crafted and narrated.

PLOT: 17.5/20

The narrative explores a poignant and intricate tale of love, duty, and sacrifice set against a backdrop of royal intrigue. Childhood friends Chan and Luka share a profound bond, complicated by familial obligations and unspoken feelings. As they navigate their evolving relationship amidst the pressures of everything.The plot delicately balances themes of forbidden love and personal sacrifice, ultimately portraying a deeply moving journey of affection and heartache.The narrative intricately weaves a tale of deep-rooted friendship and unspoken love between Chan and Luka, set within the constraints of royal duties and familial expectations. As childhood companions, their bond evolves into a complex web of affection and sacrifice, complicated further by Luka’s sister’s engagement to Chan. The story delicately explores the tension between personal desires and societal obligations, capturing the characters’ struggles and emotional turmoil with sensitivity. Through poignant moments and hidden emotions, the plot reveals the depth of their connection and the bittersweet nature of their love, ultimately crafting a resonant and memorable journey that balances intimacy with the harsh realities of their world.The story’s elegance lies in its exploration of how true feelings are often constrained by circumstances, leaving a lasting impact on both characters and readers alike.

WRITING STYLE: 18/20

The author’s writing style is simple yet elegant, creating a soothing and smooth narrative with straightforward sentences and words. The story is sophisticated, displaying the characters' feelings and emotions in a graceful and understated way. Despite being set in an ancient time, the narrative focuses on the universal human experience of love, showcasing how the characters navigate love, fate, and their responsibilities with a subtle, sweet touch.

GRAMMAR AND VOCABULARY: 19/20

The author’s grammar and vocabulary are strong, with minimal errors, making the story smooth and easy to read. However, while the simplicity of the language suits the narrative, using more expressive words and refining descriptions could enhance the story’s appeal. By elevating the vocabulary and style slightly, the author could make the story more captivating and add depth, attracting a wider range of readers and giving the plot an extra layer of sophistication.

CHARACTERS AND DEVELOPMENT: 8.5/10

The characters in this story are well-developed, with a clear emotional depth that makes them relatable and engaging. Chan and Luka’s relationship evolves naturally from childhood friendship into a complex, unspoken love, driven by internal conflict and external circumstances. Luka's character is particularly compelling, as he struggles between his duty to his sister and his own hidden feelings for Chan. Chan, too, shows growth as he comes to terms with his emotions, balancing his role as a king, friend and his affections for Luka. The author skillfully portrays their internal dilemmas, allowing readers to empathize with their emotional journeys. The supporting characters, like Luka's sister, add further depth, creating a dynamic that emphasizes loyalty, sacrifice, and the bittersweet nature of love. Overall, the characters are thoughtfully developed, contributing to the emotional impact of the story.

TOTAL: 85.5/100