Book Name: Stellify

Author: HotChocoChipCookie

Reviewer: Suzy

Cover: 04/05

Way better than the previous one, the cover looks calm and gives that subtle delicate vibes. The author name font can be changed to something more cursive and needs a little size readjustment.

Title: 04/05

Aesthetic, intriguing and fits the plot well. Good job there.

Synopsis: 03/10

Short and well written, though I'd love to see more descriptions and references from the book to give it a little thrill and make up for the tad bit of emptiness it got.

Execution: 08/10

Stunning. I loved the way you decided to go on with the scenarios. The pacing was average and the beginning scene could've been written with few more details. 

Plot: 08/20

Though it is a short story, there are many plot holes which do need an explanation. For example, the girl who was jumping down the bridge, who is she? Here you can go one of the two options. First, she could be someone Jinae was close to, maybe a friend or someone from her past? In this case, her stopping the car and going all the way to saving her life would be more logical. The second suggestion, she could be a mystery creature since your book goes somewhere into the afterlife part and fantasy genre. This could be more of a philosophical explanation. Anyway, do let your readers know who this mysterious girl is. Rest of the part is good I guess.

Writing Style: 09/20

Your writing style is quite influential and interesting. The story might be a little cliché but remember that writing a cliché story without making your readers yawn is a skill and you did well in this aspect. The descriptions were a little vague though, you could've explained a few scenarios with more details. Do work on your descriptive writing.

Grammar & Vocabulary: 16/20

You can work a lot more on your usage of literary devices. The book barely had any grammatical errors as far as I could notice and that makes it a lot more comfortable to read. You are simple with your words but there's never a pause when it comes to learning so keep working on your vocabulary, use more effective and interesting words when you describe a particular action or person.

Total: 52/90

Final Note: Usage of better adjectives, the author name placement on the cover and filling up the plot holes. Voila! Your book is good to get discovered and appreciated by the fellow readers out there.