Author of the book LamiaAmatorPrincipem

Review by Tae-s-bear

Title :: 3/10

From each and every chapter, I don't find how a person's failed "first love" is the downfall of their life. Sorry to say but the title is not suitable for the concept you've mentioned in the story.

Cover :: 2/10

The cover is not at all unique which can attract the readers to open the book at least. It's just the title pasted in a random picture with some added fonts. Try to make it unique and attractive.

Description: 3/10

It's just the introduction of the author, nothing more or less. Need to add some convos and lines from the story itself to make the readers curious to open the book. In Wattpad the books are judged by the description and the cover so try to make it attractive.

Pace :: 7/10

Yes the pace is okay but you still need to describe the situation more.

Concept and plot :: 3/10

It is a unique book where the plot is unique as it's my first time to read this type of real life concept. But there are many things which are not mentioned here because here are mainly teenagers who are still learning about themselves and these small gaps can influence them badly. (Not saying the plot can influence them) but there are some gaps like the time you found out about yourself as a "lesbian", the way you felt, have you undergone some sort of anxiety or not, or thinking what "society" will say. These types of things I felt that they may overthink and it is human instinct to compare themselves with others so you need much precautions before posting this sort of topic on a platform where everyone can read what you're saying.

Characters Development :: 3/10

All the characters are not at all described enough. It was just added into the story by the name of "friend".

Grammar and Vocabulary: 4/10

There are some typos and grammatical mistakes which need to be edited and try to use some different words.

Writing style :: 4/10

No precautions were taken before writing this sort of story which can influence the teenagers. Time is not fixed or time change is rapid which may confuse the readers. It feels like each or every other chapter is jumping from one time to another. The story itself is not organised and characters are coming in each chapter without any description.

Overall impression: 2/10

(No Hate) but still I wanna say that each and every story which you may think is special for you or a story which should have to be in memory till your last breath may not be same to others. So every story special to you may not be so interesting and beautiful to read for every person. So neither the story is composed and organised in a very pleasing way nor the story is served to make people curious to read it. Try to make it better and have a happy life journey<33.

Rating of the book :: 4.5/10
Total :: 35.5/100

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