Author of the book: Seong_Grace

Review by Tae-s-bear

Title :: 8/10

The title is very unique as well as matching with the topic of the story. Just try to give some fonts in the title then it'll be more catchy.

Cover :: 9/10

The cover is too good. It is well edited and the title of the book is also mentioned here vividly. It's very attractive and catchy.

Description :: 8/10

The description is awesome. It helps to raise the curiosity among the readers about what can happen in the story. Just try to give the description of the characters and their roles.

Pace;:: 3/10

The pace was too fast and the stories felt much in rush

Concept and plot :: 5/10

The plot is very messy to understand. It felt like jumping from one situation to another. It was not well defined. It felt too fictitious to read and understand. Also the expression of the characters were not matching with the concept of the story. Add the meaning of the topic in the first place so that readers can understand what they are diving into.

Characters: 6/10

In the characters definition, you need to give much more description than it already is. However in the story the characters were well defined.

Grammar :: 3/10

There are too many grammatical and typing mistakes. It has become too difficult to understand the situation due to that. Try to edit it before posting.

Writing style :: 2/10

So many things were added in one chapter itself that makes the readers lose interest. It would be better if you define each and every part clearly in the story. Try to extend the chapters and less the time change. Also give povs of different characters so it'll be interesting to see the perspective of the characters itself. Mention the place and time when time and situation change is happening.

There are some parts where the description was not clear. Example- why he targeted that female lead, why he did this, how many girls fell in this trap,. So many things were uncleared here. It was so fast that I, as a reader, was not able to get a grip on the story from where to where it is going.

Overall impression :: 5/10

Try to read more books to understand the art of writing story books. Please take the review in a positive manner and continue writing and entertaining.>33

Rating of the book :: 5/10
Total :: 54/100

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