Author Of The Book bts_army7saranghe

Reviewer: Sugaga777

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Title: 8.5/10

The title of this book is a perfect match of the story... I suggest you to give a subtitle.

Cover: 9.5/10

The cover seems well-edited and neat. It give the story vibe and matches the story!

Blurb: 9.5/10

The blurb was in quick length. It describes the story in an interesting manner. I like how you kept it mysterious.

Grammar and Vocabulary: 8.5/10

The use of grammar is nice, but I found some grammatical errors, there are typos. The vocabulary was casual yet fits the atmosphere of the story, but I suggest you use complex words.

Pace: 10/10

The story is smooth and has no rush. It's very intriguing to read.

Characters Development: 8.5/10

Characters have a good and realistic personality. I like how they build up, but at some point it felt like their personalities are different.

Concept and Plot: 9/10

The concept of the story is great, I really like the serial killer story, and for every serial killer story, Taehyung is perfect!! There were funny scenes too, which made it more fun to read. The killer is yet to reveal but I think it's Taehyung.

Writing style: 7/10

Your writing style is good. You should improve your writing skills tho, rather then writing with just character and dialogue, you should write it like a novel, this will allow you to explain the character more and show some gestures with dialogues.

Overall Presentation: 8/10

This book is really good, I really like the concept. You just need to work on writing style.

Rating of the book: 7/10

I enjoyed this book. It's interesting. Just some improvement.

Total: 85.5/100

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